Linking this with the The Blog Chatter, Prompt Nights at A Dash of Sunny, and Open Link Night at d’Verse.
It is Here…
When I saw it, it shone from far,
Unreachable, I thought that star,
But with each step, it felt more dear,
The dream I saw, it now feels near.
The world around, I did not forget,
But on that star, my eyes were set,
A purpose found, soon lost was fear,
The dream I saw, it now feels near.
A race to reach first, it had seemed,
Some went soon, yet for me it gleamed,
It was meant for me, that was clear,
The dream I saw, it now feels near.
To take the chance, the time is now,
Nourished the dream, with lots of love,
The words now shine, to me they near,
The dream I saw, it now feels here.
(© Vinay Leo R. @ I Rhyme Without Reason, 29th July 2016)
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing to me are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
Whistles!!! Such a fantastic depiction here of merging reality with dreams Vinay 😀 especially love images of the stars shining its light upon us and guiding us towards our purpose. Beautifully penned. Thank you so much for participating at Prompt Nights and for your constant love and support 😀
Lots of love,
Sanaa
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Glad you liked the poem and the imagery in it, Sanaa. Thank you. 🙂 I think it’s important not to leave sight of the dream and the journey towards it.
That’s awesome! Loved the poem and the narration to nourish the seed of your dreams 🙂 Keep up the good work. 🙂
And Thanku so much for dropping a wonderful comment on my current post. 🙂
Glad you like my poetry, Saumy. 😀 I love the photography too, as I said. I hope that, if it is your dream, you get it showcased at some gallery. 🙂
Dreams aspirations are wonderful things, almost anything is possible if you believe hard enough.
Kind regards
Anna :o]
I agree. Thanks, Anna. 🙂
Something so tangible woven here and gave me conviction to be in the now, quite special 🙂 Poppy…
Glad you felt that it gave you that conviction, Poppy. 🙂
Hello Vinay…always happy to see you. 🙂 I like how you set your sights on that star so far away and yet with your purpose in mind your dream came near. Very beautifully and sincerely written!
Always happy to see you here too, Gayle. 😀 Glad that you liked my poem and my journey. 🙂 Thank you so much.
Always happy to see your work, Vinay. You have done a lovely job with form and rhyme in this.
Always happy to see you here too, Victoria. 🙂 Thank you for the kind words of praise.
A breath-taking poem. The imagery you painted is quite wonderful and beautifully stunning.
I love this poem a lot and its my favorite poem. 🙂
Glad that you loved the imagery that I painted, Charlie. Thank you. 🙂
I’m honored that you feel that it’s your favorite poem. 😀
This is inspiring – never give up on your dreams.
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I agree. I hope not to. 🙂 Thanks, Maria.
Beautiful poem! A great message and I like the rhythm and repetition. I came over from dVerse, thanks for sharing!
Hi Dr. Crystal. 🙂 Glad you liked my poem, the message and the rhythm & repetition! 😀 Will head over to yours really soon.
The last line is just beautiful and ties it all together well.
🙂 Thank you, kanzensakura.
A nice poem on not losing track of your dream.Great!
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Glad you felt so, Subha. 🙂 Thank you.
Absolutely delightful Vinay, I agree the dream and the journey we do need to cling to as together they give us hope of a better life…
Yes, Michael. 🙂 Only looking at the journey or only looking at the dream, it’ll make us miss the other. And that’s missing a lot. 😀 Glad you found it delightful!
Lovely..we all want our dreams to turn into realities and hope is one way to keep our dreams alive 🙂
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I know. That hope is what keeps us going. 🙂 Glad you liked my poetry, Deepa.
It’s an inspiring post. Love the line – Time is now. Only then will dreams unfurl. May all your dreams come true! It’s lovely to see how passionate you are about words… so am I! 🙂
Glad you loved my post, and felt it reflected my passion. 🙂 Thank you, Dee.
Dream come true when you work hard and when there is no fear. I am glad you feel that you are nearing your dream. Lovely poem, Vinay. 🙂
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Yes. It has been a while, Ramya. 🙂 I think it’s nearing time for me to reach and grab it.
Where dreams and reality coincide. Love it!! Here’s wishing your dreams are soon a reality. 🙂
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Thank you, Modern Gypsy. I hope for that too. 🙂
Luv you end of hope
Much love…
Thanks, Gillena.
I hope your dreams come into the reality in truest forms!
Wonderfully expressed Vinay 🙂
Cheers
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I hope for that as well, Geets. 🙂 Thank you.
The hope of dreams being possible- lovely
Thank you, debi. I believe that they can be possible.
The refrain works like a tug on my reader’s heart. I’m watching with the speaking, feeling the dream come near and near and near… until it’s a reality. And that is wonderful!
Yes. 🙂 Reading it after, I felt that tug too. I liked the belief and the transition. Thanks very much, Magaly.
Love the words and the repetition! It isn’t about reaching there first, it’s just about us and our achievement. A perfect depiction! 😀
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Yes. 🙂 Exactly, Dashy. 😀 It’s about us, the journey and the accomplishment! Thank you.
All we need is the twinkle of a star to assure us, a message to follow our dreams. What a great Poem Leo.
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The dream does twinkle, guiding us toward it. 🙂 I hope that we follow. Thank you, Old Egg.
A nice ideal.
I certainly hope so, Rosemary. 🙂
A lovely poem, encouragement for us all,,,to keep our eye on the star,,,,
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Yes. It is quite nice to follow the star and get your dreams. 🙂 Thanks, Ellecee.
I hope your dreams become reality soon!
I hope so too, Freya. 🙂