Mom, I see you up there tonight, looking down at us.
It’s because of you I have had the strength to live on.
You held my hand through the pain of two miscarriages.
If only words could say how much I miss you right now.
Today, on Mother’s Day, I became a mother at last.
This is a 55 Fiction, which is a form of microfiction that is either limited to a maximum of fifty-five words or have a requirement of exactly 55 words.
This post is a part of Write Over the Weekend, an initiative for Indian Bloggers by BlogAdda.
(11th April 2014)
Mom’s are precious aren’t they. Sometimes they do so much without us realizing.
Yes, very precious da Jb. 🙂
That was powerful and poignant Leo.
Nicely expressed in just 55 words
Thank you, Pixie 🙂 Glad you felt it was expressed well.
This is beautiful. So bittersweet. Mother’s Day is hard when mom is not around.
More bitter than sweet, I guess. Thank you Kimberly 🙂
In just 55 words… you made it so powerful!
-Your biggest fan
Simran 🙂
😛 Glad you liked it, Sims.
This is beautiful though sad. Mother’s love wraps us around forever be it she’s with you or not… I have heard this. 🙂
Indeed 🙂 That love is too powerful. Glad you liked the story, Namrata.
beautiful, Mothers are the bestttt…
Indeed they are, Bikram 🙂
short and sweet
Thanks, Swarasa 🙂