musty…
fragrant earth green
after spring rain
*!~!*
warm spring sun…
the distant roar
as a river awakens
Shared with April A2Z Heights Day 21, Open Prompt, and d’Verse Poets (Poetics – Spring).
(April 21st, 2013)
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing to me are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
really like the juxtapostions of musty, fragrant, and warm, with distant and roar –
very nice! thanks leo 😉
Thank you, Felipe. Glad you liked the haiku. 🙂
oh nice..i much like the distant roar of the awakening river…adds a nice wildness to spring…
Spring is wild, free 🙂 Thanks, Claudia. Nice to be back at the bar!
Very nicely expressed! Yup, that’s spring.
Thanks, Mary.
Lovely words specially the second one ~ Happy spring day ~
Happy Spring to you too, Grace! 🙂
Looks like spring is in the air!! 😀
Thanks, Nanka! It is indeed 😉
Masterful spring.. at the moment some of the rivers are brimming with water, so the second one is quite befitting.
Spring is beautiful here too, Bjorn 🙂 thanks!
The first word instantly commands a dramatic atmosphere, setting an enigmatic mood for the haiku!
Thanks, Gemma.
Very nice especially, the second one…the river has sprung to life..where is my paddle?
Thanks, Truedessa.