falling kite –
ascent in life
cut
Shared with April A2Z Heights Day 1, Ascent and as participation for Blogging from A to Z, Day 1 = Letter A..
(April 1st, 2013)
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
Kati patang …
Na koi umang hai,
Na koi tarang hai,
Meri jindagi bhi kya ek kati patang hai…
Nice verse, Sims 🙂
Cut short, that’s for sure!
Ascent
Your use of the word cut adds a bit more mystery to this and leaves me with a sadness.
It’s what I meant, Wabi. The sudden cut that brings it down.
Yeah. Midway too, MMT 🙁
effective
poignant verse
You are in good form as always.
Lee
Thanks, Lee. 🙂
Oh…a simple “Wow!” on this excellent verse say it all.
Thanks for the wow, Martin 🙂
So poignant
Thanks, Celestine.
Minimalistic. Great!
Thanks, Alic. 🙂
Will it fly again?
It can, and it mostly will, Amrit. It just needs a new thread of hope. 🙂