breakfast –
the orange sunrise
in my glass
Day #15, NaHaiWriMo February, Orange.
(February 15th, 2013)
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breakfast –
the orange sunrise
in my glass
Day #15, NaHaiWriMo February, Orange.
(February 15th, 2013)
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aloha Leo. i like this one a lot. great double possibilities in the meaning, yet each line is clear and concrete as an image. the last line gives a great twist to the possibilities in the first two lines. yeah. way cool haiku. aloha.
I’m really glad it came out well, Rick. Thanks very much 🙂
Beautiful …
Thanks, Helena.
wow …. what a breakfast 🙂
😛 Hmm. Yeah, GS.