circle of dreams –
I run the laps
counting drops
in the ocean
Shared with Poetic Asides (Day 7, Circles).
(’12, Nov 07)
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
A beautiful circle indeed !!!
Thanks GS
I really like this one. “counting the drops in the ocean” Is this what dreams are – drops in the ocean. It can seem that way.
I was only implying that dreams can be countless, Elle 🙂 Not that dreams are like the drops in the ocean.
really liking the last two lines as well
Thanks, Bruce!