~ STORM ~
swaying oak –
afternoon tea
in the cellar
Caribbean Kukai (2nd place, September 2012)
~ DREAMS ~
shaping dreams..
the potter’s hand on his
wheel of fortune
Caribbean Kukai (Winner, October 2012)
(’12, Oct 25)
I live in words
~ STORM ~
swaying oak –
afternoon tea
in the cellar
Caribbean Kukai (2nd place, September 2012)
~ DREAMS ~
shaping dreams..
the potter’s hand on his
wheel of fortune
Caribbean Kukai (Winner, October 2012)
(’12, Oct 25)
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Both the haiku provide such vivid pictures … the swaying oak and the potter … lovely !!!
Thanks, GS.
Love the storm Haiku. Have done that before!!! Your words bring the adventure back 🙂
Both are so well done.
Thanks, Elle. Glad you liked it. Cheers!
I liked the second one more…”potter’s hands on the wheel of fortune “..
there is a spark of life in your writings.. 🙂
Thanks, Odyz 🙂 Glad you felt the spark.