~ STORM ~
swaying oak –
afternoon tea
in the cellar
Caribbean Kukai (2nd place, September 2012)
~ DREAMS ~
shaping dreams..
the potter’s hand on his
wheel of fortune
Caribbean Kukai (Winner, October 2012)
(’12, Oct 25)
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
Both the haiku provide such vivid pictures … the swaying oak and the potter … lovely !!!
Thanks, GS.
Love the storm Haiku. Have done that before!!! Your words bring the adventure back 🙂
Both are so well done.
Thanks, Elle. Glad you liked it. Cheers!
I liked the second one more…”potter’s hands on the wheel of fortune “..
there is a spark of life in your writings.. 🙂
Thanks, Odyz 🙂 Glad you felt the spark.