conscious
of a word to adhere to
I write
when I write
with the flow of beats
my heart sings
Linked with OctPoWriMo (Day 21, With the flow) and Haiku Heights (#192, Conscious).
(’12, Oct 21)
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
Oh wow! Both haiku beautifully express the sentiments behind them. Loved this!
Thanks, Zainab 🙂
I specially like the second one ~ I feel my heart singing when my verses fit ~
I do indeed, Grace 🙂 Nothing quite like it.
This proves your love towards words !!!
Thanks, GS.
writing with the flow of beats…beautiful.
Glad you liked it, Susan. Thanks 🙂
Love the sweet but simple lines Leo.. 🙂
Thanks, Amity.
Beautifully written.
Thanks, Celestine.
“Conscious” was harder than I thought. You capture the poet view here as if it were easy. I agree that once conscious of the word, the rest is song.
Poetry is passion, but not easy. Not at all, Susan 🙂 Thanks.
Consciously singing aloud with your muse. It’s been a great pleasure to read your pieces 🙂
Thanks, Clarice. I enjoy singing with her too, at times 😉