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like
a
lone pearl
on velvet
dew drop of my soul
borne of sapid melancholy
it waits for mornings
still like night
in moon’s
last
light
OSI #197 – Sapid
© (05/12/2011)
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing to me are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
Beautiful….
Wonderfully woven verses Leo. Love the imagery as well.
Very touching indeed… what a way to describe.. Dew drop of the soul…Thanks Leo for this wonderful write…indeed Sapid..
Soul stirring and heart warming…beautiful…
This was…so so beautiful. THANK YOU for adding this beautiful and new dimension to the picture. 'Moon's last light'….this was absolutely wonderful.And also the fact that this was in fibonacci. 🙂
Loved the sapid melancholy of your words Leo!For every word you etch, it is always magical!True to a real poet like you!
Also…It does look like drop 😛 you know what I am talking about. Curve the edges a bit when you see it. 😛
If my depressed and gloomy days were flavored like yours, I might have a pearl too!
Wow! this is expressed with exquisite minimalism. I like this form, it forces tight writing. Also like the new look of your blog.
nice…tis the season that they come all the more…a dew drop of the soul…nice
beautiful and I love how you shaped this.
exquisite
Beautiful 🙂
Absolutely Beautiful 🙂
Vinay, Came back to your blog after a long time and so liked this one. Hope you are doing good.
beautiful