does the jasmine feel
the absence of her sister –
cut in morning light
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| Image Source: Flower Pictures, through Google Images search. |
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| SHW #127 |
Jenn hosts Sensational Haiku Wednesdays, from Wednesday to Sunday each week. The theme this week over there is Absence.
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| HH #96 |
Haiku Heights is my meme. Each Saturday, I give a prompt there for a poem in the Haiku form of poetry. This week is the 96th prompt, which is Light.
© (30/11/2011)
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
I could feel? beautiful jasmine, so pure and pretty…i could smell too…
Ah, the spirit of nature will compensate. Great haiku.
Beautiful 🙂
maybe not, well done.
Highly impressive. Keep it up.
beautiful!
she'd be devastated!nice haiku =)
Sadness…but thank goodness the jasmine will sprout another bloom…great haiku
jasmine has such a wonderful smell, jasmine might not notice her sister gone because the smell would always be there
Suddenly I can smell jasmine in the air. Lovely haiku!
Jasmines are my fav. :)Nice one ..