I’m not the only one to blame;
this rapidly changing outlook
has made me lose all strength.
My mind’s balance has gone,
motionless with just one view,
unable to swivel, see more.
I once felt, I wouldn’t change;
I have to, to find a safety net.
Cleaning all wrong thoughts
for eloquent ones to return.
Forgive my abrupt goodbye,
in the light of a coral sunset;
I change my path to save me,
and perhaps you once again.
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| D’Verse – Poetics |
D’verse Poets Pub is a place for poets from all over the world to gather and celebrate, improve and even learn poetry. Their feature, Poetics, is hosted by Sheila Moore this week and offers a theme “Change” as the topic for a poem.
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| Sunday Whirl #30 |
The Sunday Whirl, hosted by Brenda Warren, offers twelve or thirteen words to be put into a poem or story. This prompt, their 30th had actually come out last Sunday.. I struggled with completing it, and in the end, offer this piece with eleven out of the twelve offered words used.
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
Brilliant one Leo…I loved the last line the most…And perhaps you once again:)
Brilliant one Leo…I loved the last line the most…And perhaps you once again:)
oh i can feel this..sometimes we need to be ok with ourselves again to do justice to the other.. just coming back from such a time of cleaning and replacing..hopeful ending there..i like
oh i can feel this..sometimes we need to be ok with ourselves again to do justice to the other.. just coming back from such a time of cleaning and replacing..hopeful ending there..i like
@TWEETY,Thanks very much. Glad you love it, and especially that last line.@CLAUDIA,Thank you 🙂 Yes, we need to be OK with ourselves first, then only we can be happy with who we are being with the other.
@TWEETY,Thanks very much. Glad you love it, and especially that last line.@CLAUDIA,Thank you 🙂 Yes, we need to be OK with ourselves first, then only we can be happy with who we are being with the other.
i feel you as well on this one man…sometimes we have to make those tough decisions that are going to hurt so much but be so much better in the long run….
i feel you as well on this one man…sometimes we have to make those tough decisions that are going to hurt so much but be so much better in the long run….
I agree with Claudia & Brian.. we need to make things right with ourselves first.nice sentiments here..much enjoyed!
I agree with Claudia & Brian.. we need to make things right with ourselves first.nice sentiments here..much enjoyed!
meaningful share… i always believe that change starts with ourselves ~happy day ~
meaningful share… i always believe that change starts with ourselves ~happy day ~
Well I can't detect that misplaced stroke for I'm an amateur myself…I really liked the last lines :)www.sadafhafeez.blogspot.com
Well I can't detect that misplaced stroke for I'm an amateur myself…I really liked the last lines :)www.sadafhafeez.blogspot.com
a Fun Read.
a Fun Read.
This is remarkable.
This is remarkable.
@BRIAN,It's tough, but better to let go now and save both souls than hang on and suffocate one or the other. Better in the long run for sure…@LYNNE,Exactly. Thank you for dropping by and giving some kind words of appreciation..@HEAVEN,Yes, I hope that belief stays true always too!@SADAF,Not always necessary to critique, just an option of course. 🙂 Glad you liked it.@NOISELESS, @CELLO,Thanks!
@BRIAN,It's tough, but better to let go now and save both souls than hang on and suffocate one or the other. Better in the long run for sure…@LYNNE,Exactly. Thank you for dropping by and giving some kind words of appreciation..@HEAVEN,Yes, I hope that belief stays true always too!@SADAF,Not always necessary to critique, just an option of course. 🙂 Glad you liked it.@NOISELESS, @CELLO,Thanks!
yes, once we closed our minds it is so hard to change. I often have to walk away to gain a new perspective.
yes, once we closed our minds it is so hard to change. I often have to walk away to gain a new perspective.