Stormy was the dark night,
Heavens crying with all might,
It was lightning that revealed,
A shadow once concealed,
I knew then, I’d have to fight.
Heavens crying with all might,
It was lightning that revealed,
A shadow once concealed,
I knew then, I’d have to fight.
Alas, the night was forlorn,
Caught the guy, but I mourn,
That one knock-out punch,
Mistaken was my first hunch,
It earned me my dad’s scorn.
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| November PAD Challenge Day 17. #novpad17 |
The month of November sees the Poem-a-Day (PAD) challenge, hosted by Robert Lee Brewer at Poetic Asides. Day 17 theme is to write a poem that reveals something. It’s in the Limerick form. Thanks Robert for the inspiration.
© (17/11/2011)
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing to me are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
Vinay! Great Rhyming!!!Hope you keep them coming!!! 🙂
Vinay! Great Rhyming!!!Hope you keep them coming!!! 🙂
Great concept…. and put very well in rhyming words….
Great concept…. and put very well in rhyming words….
Lovely rhyme..vinay, good job..
Lovely rhyme..vinay, good job..
oh my God.. Rhyme at its best Leo.. Wish I should write a rhyme now.. Have to be poetic.. soon..Someone is Special
oh my God.. Rhyme at its best Leo.. Wish I should write a rhyme now.. Have to be poetic.. soon..Someone is Special
@NISHA,Thank you 🙂 I hope that too!@JANHVI,Thank you very much :)@PRAMODA,Thank you!@SARAVANA,Thanks and good luck with your poetic return!
@NISHA,Thank you 🙂 I hope that too!@JANHVI,Thank you very much :)@PRAMODA,Thank you!@SARAVANA,Thanks and good luck with your poetic return!