Once upon a dream..

Once upon a dream –
I saw myself exactly
as I am this day


November PAD Challenge Day 16. #novpad16

The month of November sees the Poem-a-Day (PAD) challenge, hosted by Robert Lee Brewer at Poetic Asides. Day 16 theme is to fill the blank in the phrase “Once upon a _____” and then use that as title of the poem being written. It’s in the Senryu form. Thanks Robert for the inspiration.
Rally #56

Poet’s Rally hosted by Ava once a fortnight is a place for poets to join in and have fun sharing and reading poetry. It goes into its 56th edition today.


© (16/11/2011)

Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.

  

60 thoughts on “Once upon a dream..

  1. Hi Leo! Simple yet profound. Don't we all aim for that in our writing.Don't forget to check out the guest posts at RFW. Looking forward to getting together again on Dec 2.Denise

  2. Hi Leo! Simple yet profound. Don't we all aim for that in our writing.Don't forget to check out the guest posts at RFW. Looking forward to getting together again on Dec 2.Denise

  3. That would be the most wonderful thing happening to me, if only it was trueHow satisfied you feel coming up to your own expectations…seeing yourself achieve all of that you had once aimed for 🙂

  4. That would be the most wonderful thing happening to me, if only it was trueHow satisfied you feel coming up to your own expectations…seeing yourself achieve all of that you had once aimed for 🙂

  5. @ECLIPSE,Thank you for letting me know and finding it to be brilliant 🙂 @CUCKOO,Thanks!@MORNING,Thanks!@DENISE,Yes, we aim that in our writing, in ourselves too! Will read up and try to join in on Dec 2 as well :)@CLARIICE,May all come true soon, indeed. Thanks for liking the style, in simplicity as well :)@TINKWEL,Thanks very much 🙂 Glad u liked it.@SARAVANA,It's okay. Glad you got it after I messaged you! Thanks! :)@CHARLES,Thank you my friend! Glad you liked it!@SUZY,Yes, they are indeed! Glad you love it! :)@MANI,Thank you very much 🙂 @JANHVI,Thank you, glad you liked it in its exactness! 🙂

  6. @ECLIPSE,Thank you for letting me know and finding it to be brilliant 🙂 @CUCKOO,Thanks!@MORNING,Thanks!@DENISE,Yes, we aim that in our writing, in ourselves too! Will read up and try to join in on Dec 2 as well :)@CLARIICE,May all come true soon, indeed. Thanks for liking the style, in simplicity as well :)@TINKWEL,Thanks very much 🙂 Glad u liked it.@SARAVANA,It's okay. Glad you got it after I messaged you! Thanks! :)@CHARLES,Thank you my friend! Glad you liked it!@SUZY,Yes, they are indeed! Glad you love it! :)@MANI,Thank you very much 🙂 @JANHVI,Thank you, glad you liked it in its exactness! 🙂

  7. @CHIM,Thank you dear poet 🙂 Glad you liked it.@ADURA,Yes, it is indeed 🙂 Glad you like the short punch in my words!@INA,Amen 🙂 Amen to that!@JACQUI,Thank you so very much :D@SUSIE,Yes, it is indeed lovely! 🙂 Feels so right too!@AAKRITI,It feels so right now! 🙂 It felt the same then.@GERRY,Thank you friend! :)@DAKSHI,Thanks :)@TWEETY,It would be the most wonderful thing to many a person I think! It's most satisfying to know we are who we wanted to be!@KAY,Very true. Very true 🙂 Glad you liked it! Thank you.@CELESTIAL,Thank you very much 🙂

  8. @CHIM,Thank you dear poet 🙂 Glad you liked it.@ADURA,Yes, it is indeed 🙂 Glad you like the short punch in my words!@INA,Amen 🙂 Amen to that!@JACQUI,Thank you so very much :D@SUSIE,Yes, it is indeed lovely! 🙂 Feels so right too!@AAKRITI,It feels so right now! 🙂 It felt the same then.@GERRY,Thank you friend! :)@DAKSHI,Thanks :)@TWEETY,It would be the most wonderful thing to many a person I think! It's most satisfying to know we are who we wanted to be!@KAY,Very true. Very true 🙂 Glad you liked it! Thank you.@CELESTIAL,Thank you very much 🙂

  9. Leo ! I had a question in mind. The graffiti on your wall popped up into my mind : I love in words!SO I thought I must put this question before you.Here's the exact thought :Words trapped within become like prisoners rattling the cage bars to get out. How come they sometimes hurt so. What is the force of words unwritten that drives the sleepless nights?Have you found any wisdom about this drive, this instinct to express, that pierces the night?

  10. Leo ! I had a question in mind. The graffiti on your wall popped up into my mind : I love in words!SO I thought I must put this question before you.Here's the exact thought :Words trapped within become like prisoners rattling the cage bars to get out. How come they sometimes hurt so. What is the force of words unwritten that drives the sleepless nights?Have you found any wisdom about this drive, this instinct to express, that pierces the night?

  11. @ANDY,Thank you for finding the power in my senryu 🙂 Glad you liked it.@MAITREYEE,Sweet perhaps, don't think I've tweeted it 😉 Thank you very much :)@SADAF,Hmm. Good question. I'll think and get back to you 😀

  12. @ANDY,Thank you for finding the power in my senryu 🙂 Glad you liked it.@MAITREYEE,Sweet perhaps, don't think I've tweeted it 😉 Thank you very much :)@SADAF,Hmm. Good question. I'll think and get back to you 😀

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