Desperately holding on to life; yet
deliriously desirous to welcome Him.
Death, He comes in my nightmares,
daunting with His double rope noose.
Dampened seem life without love,
dragging on, just breathing each day.
Dead I feel, but tell me; is this life?
deliriously desirous to welcome Him.
Death, He comes in my nightmares,
daunting with His double rope noose.
Dampened seem life without love,
dragging on, just breathing each day.
Dead I feel, but tell me; is this life?
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| November PAD Challenge Day 14. #novpad14 |
The month of November sees the Poem-a-Day (PAD) challenge, hosted by Robert Lee Brewer at Poetic Asides. Day 14 theme is to write a deadly poem. I wrote on being dead when alive. It’s in the Pleiades form. Thanks Robert for the inspiration.
© (14/11/2011)
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
Interesting read 🙂
Interesting read 🙂
Fascinating. 🙂
Fascinating. 🙂
Hello Vinay :)Great poem and fitting submission for the challenge! I love your blog ~ the header is wonderful too!Will return to read more :)Best Wishes,Fiona
Hello Vinay :)Great poem and fitting submission for the challenge! I love your blog ~ the header is wonderful too!Will return to read more :)Best Wishes,Fiona
thoughtful Leo..Someone is Special
thoughtful Leo..Someone is Special
Interesting ideas .. and if i am not wrong , isnt this form where each line starts with the same letter as the poem name ?
Interesting ideas .. and if i am not wrong , isnt this form where each line starts with the same letter as the poem name ?
interesting and thought provking one..www.readitt.in ( the e magazine)
interesting and thought provking one..www.readitt.in ( the e magazine)
Wow! love the way you started every line with "D". What is it called in literature?
Wow! love the way you started every line with "D". What is it called in literature?
wow 🙂 beautiful 🙂
wow 🙂 beautiful 🙂
Poignant. Death is life without love.
Poignant. Death is life without love.
@MEOW,Thanks di. @JANHVI,Thank you very much!@FIONA,Thanks 🙂 Welcome back to read more any time. Glad you liked my entry and the header! :)@SARAVANA,Yes, I suppose :)@NIMUE,Yes, that's right. 🙂 Correct evaluation of the form!@READITT,Thank you very much :)@LEOPAW,It's called a Pleiades. It has exactly 7 lines too. And it starts with the same letter as the title's first letter.@MALINY,Thank you :)@ZACH,Yes, you could say so.!
@MEOW,Thanks di. @JANHVI,Thank you very much!@FIONA,Thanks 🙂 Welcome back to read more any time. Glad you liked my entry and the header! :)@SARAVANA,Yes, I suppose :)@NIMUE,Yes, that's right. 🙂 Correct evaluation of the form!@READITT,Thank you very much :)@LEOPAW,It's called a Pleiades. It has exactly 7 lines too. And it starts with the same letter as the title's first letter.@MALINY,Thank you :)@ZACH,Yes, you could say so.!