in thoughts…

ah, this night sky
full of twinkling stars,
winking as I walk
beneath this ceiling;
a whisper I can hear,
the wind in my ear
brings a reminder.
a friend far away
would smile so wide,
if my words travel
to her side this night;
from a lot of words,
recognize my own
and remember me.
but I send my heart;
not with the wind,
but with my words.

© (october 13, 2011)

Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.

  

88 thoughts on “in thoughts…”

  1. A lovely walk underneath a starry night…twinkling as if smiling at you…then you hear a whisper???I wouldn't mind hearing my friends words whose miles away…imagination at work… 🙂

  2. A lovely walk underneath a starry night…twinkling as if smiling at you…then you hear a whisper???I wouldn't mind hearing my friends words whose miles away…imagination at work… 🙂

  43. Hai Vinay,amazing last lines really..;) heart sent by words..that's wat we do.;)PS: Hey, longtime we spoke.. Yamini is getting married, hope u know it, just wanted to tell you..;) 

  44. Hai Vinay,amazing last lines really..;) heart sent by words..that's wat we do.;)PS: Hey, longtime we spoke.. Yamini is getting married, hope u know it, just wanted to tell you..;) 

  45. I am here after AGES!I am going to follow you instantly because I had no idea you blogged still .. the old bloggers seem to have disappeared.And words communicate much, sometimes even silence does. This.was.beautiful! 

  46. I am here after AGES!I am going to follow you instantly because I had no idea you blogged still .. the old bloggers seem to have disappeared.And words communicate much, sometimes even silence does. This.was.beautiful! 

  47. ooooo this is so beautiful Leo.  the last three lines were absolutely LOVELY 🙂 made me remind of my own friend who is far away…i am sure whoever your friend is would feel pleased like anything on reading this!!!

  48. ooooo this is so beautiful Leo.  the last three lines were absolutely LOVELY 🙂 made me remind of my own friend who is far away…i am sure whoever your friend is would feel pleased like anything on reading this!!!

  51. Hey Prams, yes I know she's getting married.. She told. 🙂 I'm not gonna be able to make it though, heavy work time! 🙁 Glad you liked my poem!

  52. Hey Prams, yes I know she's getting married.. She told. 🙂 I'm not gonna be able to make it though, heavy work time! 🙁 Glad you liked my poem!

  53. I didnt know you were regular either 😛 So thought I'll see if you are and then give a comment! Glad you liked it and found it beautiful, Aayu! 🙂 Welcome back!

  54. I didnt know you were regular either 😛 So thought I'll see if you are and then give a comment! Glad you liked it and found it beautiful, Aayu! 🙂 Welcome back!

  57. What a beautiful rhyme! The most amazing aspect of it is it is so very simple yet so soul touching and soothing at the same time 🙂

  58. What a beautiful rhyme! The most amazing aspect of it is it is so very simple yet so soul touching and soothing at the same time 🙂

  65. loved the way the thought gets expressed..simple, yet poignant :)it would be a far-fetched comparison 🙂 yet i feel the poem somehow reminds me of Neruda's 'Tonight I Can Write.."..keep the good going 🙂

  66. loved the way the thought gets expressed..simple, yet poignant :)it would be a far-fetched comparison 🙂 yet i feel the poem somehow reminds me of Neruda's 'Tonight I Can Write.."..keep the good going 🙂

  71. I wrote something like that for my grandfather too 🙂 The last three lines…are beautiful.(I am sorry I haven't been able to read as much as I used to…it is crazy the amount of lemons life is throwing at me :P)

  72. I wrote something like that for my grandfather too 🙂 The last three lines…are beautiful.(I am sorry I haven't been able to read as much as I used to…it is crazy the amount of lemons life is throwing at me :P)

  85. This is so strange. I had posted two or three comments on your blog a few days ago and I can't find them anymore. Oh well.I loved this poem so, so, so much. I remember writing something similar for my grandfather.It is beautiful!

  86. This is so strange. I had posted two or three comments on your blog a few days ago and I can't find them anymore. Oh well.I loved this poem so, so, so much. I remember writing something similar for my grandfather.It is beautiful!

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