ah, this night sky
full of twinkling stars,
winking as I walk
beneath this ceiling;
a whisper I can hear,
the wind in my ear
brings a reminder.
a friend far away
would smile so wide,
if my words travel
to her side this night;
from a lot of words,
recognize my own
and remember me.
but I send my heart;
not with the wind,
but with my words.
Β© (october 13, 2011)
A lovely walk underneath a starry night…twinkling as if smiling at you…then you hear a whisper???I wouldn't mind hearing my friends words whose miles away…imagination at work… π
A lovely walk underneath a starry night…twinkling as if smiling at you…then you hear a whisper???I wouldn't mind hearing my friends words whose miles away…imagination at work… π
Hi Leo,This is very beautifully written. The last three lines are just awesome :)Peace,Aakash Kokzhttp://www.unexpressedthoughts.com
Hi Leo,This is very beautifully written. The last three lines are just awesome :)Peace,Aakash Kokzhttp://www.unexpressedthoughts.com
very nice composition! And I loved your presentation style on this blog! Very neat and charming!http://wheneveridontgetbored.blogspot.com/
very nice composition! And I loved your presentation style on this blog! Very neat and charming!http://wheneveridontgetbored.blogspot.com/
What a beautiful reflecting andΒ amalgamationΒ of words and emotions!!!Truly adore it this prose!Between lovely font!
What a beautiful reflecting andΒ amalgamationΒ of words and emotions!!!Truly adore it this prose!Between lovely font!
This one has twinkles spread all over it… May that walk be a lovely one π
This one has twinkles spread all over it… May that walk be a lovely one π
Nice Leo
Nice Leo
Thanks, Vinodji!
Thanks, Vinodji!
Amen, Arv! π
Amen, Arv! π
Btw is by the way, Rach! π Glad you liked the poem and emotions and thanks for adoring the poem. Its not a prose! π
Btw is by the way, Rach! π Glad you liked the poem and emotions and thanks for adoring the poem. Its not a prose! π
Thanks and glad you liked it, Ankush. both presentation and poem! π
Thanks and glad you liked it, Ankush. both presentation and poem! π
Thanks and glad you found it beautiful, Aakash! π
Thanks and glad you found it beautiful, Aakash! π
I wouldn'tΒ mind it either, Amity π
I wouldn'tΒ mind it either, Amity π
V good poemThanks Leo
V good poemThanks Leo
Beautiful!Loved it a lot. π
Beautiful!Loved it a lot. π
Lovely wish :)NIcely penned
Lovely wish :)NIcely penned
Last three lines totally amazing, lovely poem…Saru
Last three lines totally amazing, lovely poem…Saru
Thanks, Alisa π
Thanks, Alisa π
Thanks, Janhvi π
Thanks, Janhvi π
Thank you, Valli π
Thank you, Valli π
Glad you liked it, thanks, Saru π
Glad you liked it, thanks, Saru π
send send Leo.. Beautiful one..Β Someone is Special
send send Leo.. Beautiful one..Β Someone is Special
Hai Vinay,amazing last lines really..;) heart sent by words..that's wat we do.;)PS: Hey, longtime we spoke.. Yamini is getting married, hope u know it, just wanted to tell you..;)Β
Hai Vinay,amazing last lines really..;) heart sent by words..that's wat we do.;)PS: Hey, longtime we spoke.. Yamini is getting married, hope u know it, just wanted to tell you..;)Β
I am here after AGES!I am going to follow you instantly because I had no idea you blogged still .. the old bloggers seem to have disappeared.And words communicate much, sometimes even silence does. This.was.beautiful!Β
I am here after AGES!I am going to follow you instantly because I had no idea you blogged still .. the old bloggers seem to have disappeared.And words communicate much, sometimes even silence does. This.was.beautiful!Β
ooooo this is so beautiful Leo.Β the last three lines were absolutely LOVELY π made me remind of my own friend who is far away…i am sure whoever your friend is would feel pleased like anything on reading this!!!
ooooo this is so beautiful Leo.Β the last three lines were absolutely LOVELY π made me remind of my own friend who is far away…i am sure whoever your friend is would feel pleased like anything on reading this!!!
Thanks, SiS π
Thanks, SiS π
Hey Prams, yes I know she's getting married.. She told. π I'm not gonna be able to make it though, heavy work time! π Glad you liked my poem!
Hey Prams, yes I know she's getting married.. She told. π I'm not gonna be able to make it though, heavy work time! π Glad you liked my poem!
I didnt know you were regular either π So thought I'll see if you are and then give a comment! Glad you liked it and found it beautiful, Aayu! π Welcome back!
I didnt know you were regular either π So thought I'll see if you are and then give a comment! Glad you liked it and found it beautiful, Aayu! π Welcome back!
Thanks and glad you liked it, Amethyst! π
Thanks and glad you liked it, Amethyst! π
What a beautiful rhyme! The most amazing aspect of it is it is so very simple yet so soul touching and soothing at the same time π
What a beautiful rhyme! The most amazing aspect of it is it is so very simple yet so soul touching and soothing at the same time π
Thanks very much Arti π welcome to my blog π I do think its the first time you have been here!
Thanks very much Arti π welcome to my blog π I do think its the first time you have been here!
Haaa,, lovely and sweet π
Haaa,, lovely and sweet π
hey this is beautiful π
hey this is beautiful π
loved the way the thought gets expressed..simple, yet poignant :)it would be a far-fetched comparison π yet i feel the poem somehow reminds me of Neruda's 'Tonight I Can Write.."..keep the good going π
loved the way the thought gets expressed..simple, yet poignant :)it would be a far-fetched comparison π yet i feel the poem somehow reminds me of Neruda's 'Tonight I Can Write.."..keep the good going π
A lovely poem!
A lovely poem!
Lovely poem. Words travel far and fast.
Lovely poem. Words travel far and fast.
I wrote something like that for my grandfather too π The last three lines…are beautiful.(I am sorry I haven't been able to read as much as I used to…it is crazy the amount of lemons life is throwing at me :P)
I wrote something like that for my grandfather too π The last three lines…are beautiful.(I am sorry I haven't been able to read as much as I used to…it is crazy the amount of lemons life is throwing at me :P)
@Bhagya,Thanks and glad you found it sweet! π
@Bhagya,Thanks and glad you found it sweet! π
@Baishali,Thanks! π
@Baishali,Thanks! π
@Neetha,Thanks! π Glad you liked it and found it beautiful!
@Neetha,Thanks! π Glad you liked it and found it beautiful!
@ Rahul,Thanks! π
@ Rahul,Thanks! π
@Vyankatesh,Yes, they most certainly do! π Thank you!
@Vyankatesh,Yes, they most certainly do! π Thank you!
@Antara,Lots of lemons here too, so no worries whatsoever! Glad you liked it and found it beautiful! π
@Antara,Lots of lemons here too, so no worries whatsoever! Glad you liked it and found it beautiful! π
This is so strange. I had posted two or three comments on your blog a few days ago and I can't find them anymore. Oh well.I loved this poem so, so, so much. I remember writing something similar for my grandfather.It is beautiful!
This is so strange. I had posted two or three comments on your blog a few days ago and I can't find them anymore. Oh well.I loved this poem so, so, so much. I remember writing something similar for my grandfather.It is beautiful!
@Antara,Yours is there itself yaar! Just look for your name na! π
@Antara,Yours is there itself yaar! Just look for your name na! π