
in concrete forest
lost without signs
but for a bistro
closed right now
sunday morning
all are at church
cobbled pathway
does it lead us out?
or take us in circles
alone with you
i am not fearful
in myriad maze
we’ll soon find
a friendly face
later some day
we’ll remember
with a big smile
the fun we had
and maybe even
come here again
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- The Sunday Whirl (Prompt #24, Wordle Image)
- Image: Lost? at Pixdaus
© Leo (October 2nd, 2011)
A lovely adventure within the city!! Strange to find places so very empty when shops are shut!! I'm sure the place will come alive once prayers are done Leo!!
A lovely adventure within the city!! Strange to find places so very empty when shops are shut!! I'm sure the place will come alive once prayers are done Leo!!
You arouse a desire in me for such an adventure. Truly the best kind. (in retrospect:)
You arouse a desire in me for such an adventure. Truly the best kind. (in retrospect:)
Getting lost or walking in circles with a friend or lover isn't half bad. Enjoyable while it lasts, a nice memory later!
Getting lost or walking in circles with a friend or lover isn't half bad. Enjoyable while it lasts, a nice memory later!
Being lost with someone you trust is so much better than being lost and alone. Lovely use of the prompt.
Being lost with someone you trust is so much better than being lost and alone. Lovely use of the prompt.
I love the sense of adventure, Leo. The picture is a wonderful illustration to your words.
I love the sense of adventure, Leo. The picture is a wonderful illustration to your words.
I love this!
I love this!
a hopeful and delightful piece.enjoyed it.I tried my first entry today.
a hopeful and delightful piece.enjoyed it.I tried my first entry today.
That is nice..! enjoying the moment of being lost in the roads "concrete jungle" !
That is nice..! enjoying the moment of being lost in the roads "concrete jungle" !
Getting lost in a foreign land – a worthy adventure indeed!I have nominated you for Liebster Blog Award – Please go to http://ironisch.wordpress.com/2011/10/02/liebster-blog-award/ to collect it. Look forward to more inspiring pieces from you 🙂
Getting lost in a foreign land – a worthy adventure indeed!I have nominated you for Liebster Blog Award – Please go to http://ironisch.wordpress.com/2011/10/02/liebster-blog-award/ to collect it. Look forward to more inspiring pieces from you 🙂
It's nice being lost when you are with someone special Leo…:) And I don't care being lost!
It's nice being lost when you are with someone special Leo…:) And I don't care being lost!
You painted a vivid picture and the illustration is stunning.
You painted a vivid picture and the illustration is stunning.
The illustration goes so well with your words. I enjoyed your writing. Well wordled. 🙂
The illustration goes so well with your words. I enjoyed your writing. Well wordled. 🙂
Thanks, Susannah 🙂 Glad you enjoyed it..
Thanks, Susannah 🙂 Glad you enjoyed it..
Thanks, Brenda 🙂
Thanks, Brenda 🙂
Sure. It is.. I think the boy in the picture likes being lost with his mother too, Amity 🙂
Sure. It is.. I think the boy in the picture likes being lost with his mother too, Amity 🙂
Thanks for the nomination, Clariice 🙂 Glad you liked the adventure I write of!
Thanks for the nomination, Clariice 🙂 Glad you liked the adventure I write of!
Thank you, KP. Glad you liked it…
Thank you, KP. Glad you liked it…
Thanks, Morning…
Thanks, Morning…
Thanks, Laurie! 🙂
Thanks, Laurie! 🙂
Yes, Brenda.. an adventure is always fun 🙂 Thanks!
Yes, Brenda.. an adventure is always fun 🙂 Thanks!
Yes. Much butter for sure, Daydreamer 🙂
Yes. Much butter for sure, Daydreamer 🙂
Not half bad 🙂 Absolutely, Mary!
Not half bad 🙂 Absolutely, Mary!
Thank you, Janet 🙂 Have fun in your adventure!
Thank you, Janet 🙂 Have fun in your adventure!
Yes, I'm quite sure too, Nanka 🙂 Maybe it's Christmas or something, hence all at church 🙂
Yes, I'm quite sure too, Nanka 🙂 Maybe it's Christmas or something, hence all at church 🙂
the ending really made me smile. so beautifully penned.
the ending really made me smile. so beautifully penned.
What a fun use of the wordle that . . . oh, yeah, youcreated. Well, 'lost' was the natural theme, but you could have left out'myriad.' Still, I love it when a wordle insists on going somewhere unexpected. I'd like to get lost with you someday in a pub. We couldexplore the poetic mind that drags 'myriad' out of the mist, but mostly we couldspeak of our shared view on what makes a poem.http://thepoetsquill.wordpress.com/
What a fun use of the wordle that . . . oh, yeah, youcreated. Well, 'lost' was the natural theme, but you could have left out'myriad.' Still, I love it when a wordle insists on going somewhere unexpected. I'd like to get lost with you someday in a pub. We couldexplore the poetic mind that drags 'myriad' out of the mist, but mostly we couldspeak of our shared view on what makes a poem.http://thepoetsquill.wordpress.com/
Hey Mike Patrick, glad you loved my use of the wordle… why leave it out? it isn't a very difficult word I think! 🙂 Will come by your pub some day hopefully! 😀
Hey Mike Patrick, glad you loved my use of the wordle… why leave it out? it isn't a very difficult word I think! 🙂 Will come by your pub some day hopefully! 😀
Thanks, Rajlakshmi! 🙂
Thanks, Rajlakshmi! 🙂
Beautiful, Leo. I hope the cobbled path leads them to a nice little place 🙂 🙂 I am visiting your blog after ages. it looks beautiful 🙂
Beautiful, Leo. I hope the cobbled path leads them to a nice little place 🙂 🙂 I am visiting your blog after ages. it looks beautiful 🙂
Thank you, Chhavi! Welcome here and glad you liked it!
Thank you, Chhavi! Welcome here and glad you liked it!
Thanks, Shravan! Glad you loved it.
Thanks, Shravan! Glad you loved it.
Thanks Taralinda. Glad you liked it.. 🙂 And hope you have fun with more wordles too!
Thanks Taralinda. Glad you liked it.. 🙂 And hope you have fun with more wordles too!
and the underlying truth, neatly hidden for the read to discover, nicely done leo 🙂 loved it 🙂
HI Leo: What a joy to read. I liked the final circle- "and maybe even return again" (to the joy of "being lost without signs") Thank you for inspiring this wordle (my first) 😉
and the underlying truth, neatly hidden for the read to discover, nicely done leo 🙂 loved it 🙂
HI Leo: What a joy to read. I liked the final circle- "and maybe even return again" (to the joy of "being lost without signs") Thank you for inspiring this wordle (my first) 😉