lost in an adventure…

it’s an adventure
in concrete forest

lost without signs
but for a bistro
closed right now
sunday morning
all are at church

cobbled pathway
does it lead us out?
or take us in circles

alone with you
i am not fearful
in myriad maze
we’ll soon find
a friendly face

later some day
we’ll remember
with a big smile
the fun we had
and maybe even
come here again


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© Leo (October 2nd, 2011)

Poetry & writing to me are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.

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  1. A lovely adventure within the city!! Strange to find places so very empty when shops are shut!! I'm sure the place will come alive once prayers are done Leo!!

  2. A lovely adventure within the city!! Strange to find places so very empty when shops are shut!! I'm sure the place will come alive once prayers are done Leo!!

  3. What a fun use of the wordle that . . . oh, yeah, youcreated. Well, 'lost' was the natural theme, but you could have left out'myriad.' Still, I love it when a wordle insists on going somewhere unexpected. I'd like to get lost with you someday in a pub. We couldexplore the poetic mind that drags 'myriad' out of the mist, but mostly we couldspeak of our shared view on what makes a poem.http://thepoetsquill.wordpress.com/

  4. What a fun use of the wordle that . . . oh, yeah, youcreated. Well, 'lost' was the natural theme, but you could have left out'myriad.' Still, I love it when a wordle insists on going somewhere unexpected. I'd like to get lost with you someday in a pub. We couldexplore the poetic mind that drags 'myriad' out of the mist, but mostly we couldspeak of our shared view on what makes a poem.http://thepoetsquill.wordpress.com/

  5. Hey Mike Patrick, glad you loved my use of the wordle…  why leave it out? it isn't a very difficult word I think! 🙂  Will come by your pub some day hopefully! 😀

  6. Hey Mike Patrick, glad you loved my use of the wordle…  why leave it out? it isn't a very difficult word I think! 🙂  Will come by your pub some day hopefully! 😀

  7. Beautiful, Leo.  I hope the cobbled path leads them to a nice little place  🙂  🙂    I am visiting your blog after ages. it looks beautiful 🙂

  8. Beautiful, Leo.  I hope the cobbled path leads them to a nice little place  🙂  🙂    I am visiting your blog after ages. it looks beautiful 🙂

  9. HI Leo:  What a joy to read.   I liked the final circle- "and maybe even return again" (to the joy of "being lost without signs")  Thank you for inspiring this wordle (my first)  😉

  10. HI Leo:  What a joy to read.   I liked the final circle- "and maybe even return again" (to the joy of "being lost without signs")  Thank you for inspiring this wordle (my first)  😉

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