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look through the water
miracles smile at your light
to them, you are too
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- Haiku Heights (Prompt #81, Water, September’s Height of Haiku Challenge)
- Recuerda mi Corazon – Haiku My Heart
© Leo (23rd September, 2011)
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing to me are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
Definitely a deep thought!!! Simply loved it….I could have never thought of such beautiful ideas!!! Incredible!!~Keep the Spark Alive..
A wonderful piece of writing.Loved the last line – very thoughtful.
I wonder if the fish think that life is better outside, on the other side of their watery front!! 🙂 Mutual admiration!!
Leo,Quite wonderful haiku.Look to your own soulMiracles smile at your lightYour words inspire
fantastic!love love love your image. your idea of water seeing the miracle of "us"….the natural world drinking in "our" light,so inspired.
Exquisite play of words! A Poet's prerogative, very well done, Vinay.
This is really cool, Leo!
loove the words .. and the image a little more .. 🙂
Hey Leo, you're a miracle too!
I rather like the idea of being a miracle! 🙂 My Watery Haiku
Love the last line ! So much positivity ! Indeed a miracle haiku 🙂
How do you do this Leo! Beautiful and loved the mutual admiration.
I just write what comes to mind, Knot2Share 🙂 Thanks!
Thank you, Adg. 🙂
Me too, MMT 🙂
Yeah. So are we all, Andy 🙂 so are we all!
Yep. Tht you would too, Nimue 🙂
Thanks, Mamazen! 🙂
Thank you, Saras! 🙂
Glad you liked it & found it inspired, Rebecca 🙂
Yeah 🙂 Glad someone is inspried, Judith. Thanks!
Don't think so, Nanka 🙂 Admiration is there, placement may not be that good an idea for the fishies! 😉
Thanks, Mike 🙂
Sure you could have 🙂 Give it a try, Rachana 😀