lone feather
fallen from the past
ripples form
today’s drops
dance in light’s music
future shines
- Shared @ Haiku Heights (Prompt #78, Feather, September’s Height of Haiku Challenge)
- Image: Sailing away…, courtesy Pixdaus.
© Leo (20th September, 2011)
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing to me are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
Beautiful thought, love the ripples forming part!
Lovely lines bristling with freshness.
Lovely job, Leo! Lovely!!
A very romantic feather haiku! Beautiful!
I wonder if the bird that lost the feather misses it… FeatherlessPomegranate
beautiful.
thanks, Blue Ocean..
Mostly not, MMT. It might just be one that naturally came loose whilst flying 🙂
Thank you, Gemma 🙂
Thanks, Andy!
Glad you liked it, Sarasji.
Thanks, Saru! 🙂
Beautiful and romantic. Perfect!
Thanks, Janhvi! 🙂
Wow…it breathed freshness!(P.S. sorry for not commenting in QUITE a while..midterm exams nearly killed me 😛 Love the new look of the blog)
Hey Antara! Welcome 😀 It's okay and glad you are alive.. I hear you had a very easy Physics paper! ;)Glad you liked the poem & its freshness!
i love the way you tied in the past, present and future, Leo. VERY nice! ♥
NOOOOOOOO Leo.. Ant cannot be lost..noooooo.. bring her back..please.. :(( Nanka did the same thing yesterday .. but then she brought her back.. we have many days to go man,, thanks!!!
Like how each one can stand alone and then go togehter so well, nice!
Like the weaving of past, today and future !
nice…if onlythe past was always a feather…but i will say the future is bright…smiles. nice write…
Yeah. very good future, if we try, and we believe I think 🙂 Thanks, Brian!
Thanks Heaven 🙂 Glad you liked the weaving!
Thank you, Pat Hatt 🙂 Glad you liked it.
Dear Rameshji, the ant can be brought back by anyone.. including you 🙂 Not necessary that the one who sends her on a trip should be the only one who can get her back, right? After all, it is only in good humor! I already notice that she has come back to your space through Traci's haiku. Don't fret! 🙂
Many thanks, Dani 🙂
This is so very nice and the past is here along with today the present and to look ahead to the further great jobhttp://gatelesspassage.com/2011/09/20/the-fait-of-our-lands/
Thank you, Brian 🙂