if hope never dies
does it sleep ; a fallen dream
seems so hypnotic
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| Image: Sad Girl by Svilen Georgiev (SikoTiko), DeviantArt. |
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- Haiku Heights (Prompt #65, Hypnotic, September’s Height of Haiku Challenge)
© Leo (7th September, 2011)
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
Wise words Leo, Wise words!
Great stuff, Leo. It seems like we never get our minds off our lost dreams.
Dreams remain like a trance in our minds till they snap out as cherished aspirations or unrealistic fantasy Leo!!
A fallen dream as hypnotic…this is a mesmerizing image, Leo! HypnoticMeadow
Wow! A great haiku Leo.I sincerely hope that hope just sleeps and never dies.
Hope hibernates, if it dies one ceases to live. Beautiful
Thank you, Rekha. Glad you found it beautiful. Yes, without hope, life is lifeless isn't it?
I sincerely hope so too, Mike. Glad you liked the haiku.
Thank you, MMT. Glad you found it mesmerizing..
Where there is life, there is hope. Lovely Haiku.
True., Nanka. but it hurts for a while when we lose them, doesn't it? Maybe that hypnotic state of loss is part of life..
Thank you, Ron. It is not that easy to get our minds off of it though.
Thank you, Andy..
Nicely done!
Oh Leo this is special . Lovey words and Imagery. Just love the drawing.
Hope and dream shall never die.
Fallen dreams – what a great take on the prompt.InspiredbyLisa
interesting question raised I think hope appears when needed most!
thank you, Amanda. I do like to think so too. 🙂
thank you, Lisa.
I certainly hope so too, Tarang.
thank you very much, Melanie.
thanks, Mama Zen.
Not true for every life, in my opinion, Daydreamer. Even we have hopeless days a lot of times right?