dance with fervent mind
let your grace invoke a power
hidden in wind’s depths
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| Image: The Road To The Windmill by Razart |
Shared @ Haiku Heights (Prompt #61, Windmill, September’s Height of Haiku Challenge) and Haiku My Heart.
© Leo (3rd September, 2011)
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
Well done!
Sheer beauty and grace in the Haiku.
I like the dancing with fervent mind ~
i like the idea of invoking one's mind on a breeze…
stunning poetry to match the artwork Vinay.
Superb !!
Thank you, Gowthami. I'm glad you liked it
Thanks very much, Amanda. I'm glad you liked it 🙂
Thank you, Miss Pie.. 🙂
Thanks, Grace.. 🙂
Thank you so very much, Rekha.. 🙂
Thank you, Mamazen 🙂
Great description of a windmill – you give the sense of how one works not just how it looks.
lovely – haiku and image
That's pretty.
Thanks a lot, Matthew.. 🙂
Thank you, Viv. 🙂
Glad you liked it, Tilly. 🙂
Windmills do dance with a lot of vitality and spell power and energy!!
A lovely haiku Leo.Evokes strong images of the winds power and strength.
:)..and thats the beautiful site to watch..
Simply beautiful. Wonderful image to enhance the words.
Just beautiful and your image enhances your words
Wonderful Haiku Leo and the image is beautiful.Melanie
Phew, there's definately a power here!
Yes, they certainly do, Nanka 🙂 I'm glad you liked it.
Thank you very much, Mike. I'm glad you liked it.
🙂 Yeah, it is quite a sight indeed, Pramoda
Thanks, TheMsLvh.
Oh yes, I know you well 🙂 Thank you, TheMsLvh..
Glad you liked it, Melanie. Thank you 🙂
Thanks, Andy 🙂
Love this poem! So compelling.
thank yu, Traci.. 🙂