tired after long day
energetic school rests fins
on a slow ride home
 |
| Photograph from Pixdaus |
Shared @ D’Verse OpenLinkNight and Sensational Haiku Wednesday (Prompt #114, School).
© Leo (31st August, 2011)
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing to me are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
ha. i need to find me a turtle to sleep on…
apt to me.. :-)Someone is Special
Like the idea of a slow ride home!
I feel like that school of fish, Leo, after a long day at my school! What fun! Thank you!
With traffic, slow ride home indeed..haha
nice creative twist to the prompt on school ~Heaven
I thought Mr. Ray taught school on the reef? Crush teaches jet stream travel and exit strategy.
I know the feeling! A charming photo and the words fit it perfectly.
Reminds me of a true-to-life version of Finding Nemo! Love it 😀
What a wonderful haiku…and the photo is simply stunning!
Makes me think of Finding NEmo!
Oh this is cute I think we were of the same idea on this one, but sometimes the slow ride home is the best!
I know just how they feel!
very nice one!the changes in the blog really good!
Ha Ha. Clever.
Wish the bus ride was faster and bumpier!! LOL!! 😀
I think the fish would agree.. but a shark wouldn't agree to be a school bus na, Nanka? 😉
Thank you, Cyberluz.
Thanks, Sowmya
🙂 Thank you, Mama Zen.
thanks Amanda. I'm glad you liked it
Thanks very much, Flooring Gooddess 🙂
Thank you, Natasha 🙂
Thanks, Joy 🙂
Hahaha 😀 Maybe he has another tuition on the side, Eric 😉
thanks, Heaven 🙂
Yes ys.. lots of traffic, Pat. 😉
Thank you, Magical Mystical Teacher 🙂 I feel the same way 😀
Hi Gemma 🙂 Thanks.
Thanks, Brian. 🙂
Is there one big enough, Brian? 😉
You can try this way then. Is there a river along the way? If it is, your school and neighborhood sounds a fun place, Kirti 😉
i am unsure…maybe a sea turtle…ride the currents you know…
Happy journey, Brian 🙂
this looks more comfortable than MY way of returning from school-on my bicycle. and the state the roads are in now… God, terrible.anyways, interesting haiku!
Reminds me of Nemo..! 🙂
🙂 I guess it does to many who read it, KP