A Whisper…

26 thoughts on “A Whisper…”

Skip to Comment Form

1. Leo, lullaby at its best..

   Someone is Special

   • Thanks very much, SiS..

2. Nice whisper and lullaby haiku…

   • Thanks, Heaven! 🙂

3. I was trying to figure out a way to use “whisper” and “lullaby” in the same haiku, and I couldn’t come up with anything decent–but you did! Lovely, Leo!

   • Thank you, and I’m glad you liked it, Magical Mystical Teacher!

     • I finally followed in your footsteps, Leo, and figured out a way to use both “whisper” and “lullaby” in the same haiku. Unfortunately, the Linky List for “whisper” was closed by the time I succeeded! 🙁

4. Lullaby is usually to lull one into sleep
   You have used it nicely to depict a change of state! Well conceived, Vinay.

   • Yes, I want a lullaby to let me sleep into another world of happiness, Sarasji! Thanks..

5. Very nice verse.

6. exquisitely written.
   that a lullaby could steal. love the unexpected power of this.
   so glad you are here leo.
   thank you.

7. I love this. Sometimes we need to be jolted out of our sadness and a whisper is all it takes. -Lola

8. I enjoyed the poem; the sound of it is like a lullabye.

9. I want to hear one now 🙂 🙂 Beautiful Leo 🙂

10. sad and sweet all at once, I loved this one Leo…

11. Sweet, the joy of love

12. lullabies are to be whispered, nice

13. What a perfect lullaby haiku, soft and soothing 🙂

14. Made my tongue go lllllooopy with all the L sounds!! 😀
    A whispered lullaby is so soothing!! …and can lull you to sleep in an instant!! 🙂

15. lovely…

    • Thank u, OrangeTree

16. Wow, Leo, this says a lot…escape from reality for a while and into respite in dreamland. Strong nuances…
    Rosie

    • Thank you, Rosie 🙂

17. soothing Haiku.

    • Thank you 🙂

18. Dreamy. Lullaby is so apt a title.

Comments are closed.