Uncomfortable {Shadorma}

The form of poetry here is the Shadorma. Having its roots in Spain, this sestet (6 line verse) follows a syllabic pattern of 3-5-3-3-7-5. The poem contains two shadormas.


Why do these
Uncomfortable
Whispers rise
Deep from soul
Where secrets reside in peace
Hidden from the world

Please stay off
Understand my heart
These secrets
Are not mine
To tell; they ignore; mind stays
Uncomfortable


© Leo 31/July/2011

Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.

  

24 thoughts on “Uncomfortable {Shadorma}

  1. Something that is kept or meant to be kept, unknown or unseen by others,
    causes disquiet and discomfort indeed!!

    You have successfully attempted a nice new form of poetry Leo!! 🙂

  2. Nice one for OSI. I had not yet tried a Shadorma …maybe will do soon :).And its true that ” Secrets are best stored at the hearts “

  3. others’ secrets are difficult to keep inside stomach than one’s own!!!
    i loved the verse Leo. truthful, lingering words 🙂

  4. Another new style? How do you manage to excel at every style? This speaks volumes of your understanding of poetry… I am glad that reading your posts, apart from being fun, does me a good turn too. 😀 😀

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