Autumn

She dances with the wind, his grin sly as he tickles her skin;
His fingers search, her clothes fall in a jumble near her feet,
Autumn smiles, her naked branches swaying in deep pleasure.

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© Leo 25/05/2011

Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.

44 thoughts on “Autumn”

  4. What sensuality and the delight…or is it ecstacy.. Leo beautiful..this!!!

    Leo, your visit is due to see if I am able to keep the confidence..

    • @ Ramesh Sood,

      Glad you found it beautiful 🙂 I’ve visited. Sorry for the due, I’ve been occupied elsewhere. Have been only able to return comments, not hop on my own 🙁

  5. will make me smirk all autumn when i see bare trees:P (I’ve always felt a lil sad for them but you’ve given me a whole new way to look at it.)

    on a more serious note there is life and motion in these lines.

    beautiful.

    • @ Flawed,

      Thanks! I do find trees like that too at times, but then again, beauty is in the eyes of the admirer I guess.. 🙂

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