She dances with the wind, his grin sly as he tickles her skin;
His fingers search, her clothes fall in a jumble near her feet,
Autumn smiles, her naked branches swaying in deep pleasure.
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© Leo 25/05/2011
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
Beautifully sensuous!!
@ Purvi,
I think yours is the fastest comment I’ve got. Hardly a minute after posting it 😀 Thanks!
Ooh, very sensuous full of metaphor and firey as crispy leaves..Jae
@ Jae,
Thanks! 🙂
Beautiful autumn! 🙂
@ Clariice,
Yes indeed 🙂
What sensuality and the delight…or is it ecstacy.. Leo beautiful..this!!!
Leo, your visit is due to see if I am able to keep the confidence..
@ Ramesh Sood,
Glad you found it beautiful 🙂 I’ve visited. Sorry for the due, I’ve been occupied elsewhere. Have been only able to return comments, not hop on my own 🙁
will make me smirk all autumn when i see bare trees:P (I’ve always felt a lil sad for them but you’ve given me a whole new way to look at it.)
on a more serious note there is life and motion in these lines.
beautiful.
@ Flawed,
Thanks! I do find trees like that too at times, but then again, beauty is in the eyes of the admirer I guess.. 🙂
Ah, now this is too lovely. So sensual.
@ Nara,
Thanks so very much 🙂
That’s very romantic. 🙂
@ Nethra,
Thanks! 🙂
Beautiful stuff Leo.
@ Deboshree,
Thanks ! 🙂
Very sensual.
@ Honey haiku,
Thanks very much! 🙂
truly beautiful I love the descriptive way you put this.
@ Sheilagh,
Thanks! 🙂 Glad you liked the narration.. 🙂
A passionate poem.
@ Martin,
Thanks! 🙂
Really lovely. Autumn is my favorite time of year.
@ Sheridan,
And mine too 🙂
What a beautiful analogy. Great words indeed.
@ Old Egg,
Glad you found the analogy beautiful 🙂 Thank you.
I really liked this, the sensuality of Autumn, splendid piece of writing.
Thanks! 🙂 Am Glad you liked it..!
Oh my! You really made the trees alive! That was extraordinary! I’ve never thought of trees in Autumn that way.
@ Antara,
I never did before either. 🙂 Trying to look at things a different way if I can.
Beautiful Leo..
Someone is Special
@ SiS,
Thanks! 🙂
awesome poem 🙂 absolutely beautiful imagery
@ Raji,
Thanks 🙂
Lovely poem, with a visual ambience.
@ Altonian,
Thank you 🙂
What a different way of looking at things! Very unique and descriptive using so few words.
@ Lilibeth,
Thanks! 🙂
This is gorgeous!
@ Mama Zen,
Thanks! 🙂
Lovely and sensual =)
@Mindlovemisery,
Thank you very much! 🙂
What an awesome lens through which you view the world.
@Beespoetry,
Thanks! 🙂 Glad you liked my lens..