Falls in solitude
Summer rain; now if only
My tears fell faster
Shared at Haiku Heights and Haiku My Heart
© Leo 21/05/2011
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
hail haiku! 🙂 good one bro
@ Sawan,
Thanks! 🙂
its beautiful 🙂
@ Mitu,
Thanks! 🙂 Glad you liked.
Yes, that the season of any grief to be shortened. Great job.
@ Henry,
Thanks! 🙂
the first line is cool,
well done Haiku.
@ Jingle,
Thanks! 🙂
perfect fit.
I like this. <3
@ Isha,
Thanks! 🙂
tears.. Leo superb..
Someone is Special
@ SiS,
Thanks! 🙂
so beautiful!!
@ Priyanka,
Thanks! 🙂
Summer rain gets me going. We are getting a lot of it just now. Moreover, when it rains, solitude acquires a special meaning.
Nice verse Leo. 😀
@ Deboshree,
It gets me going too, it goes so bloody hot here otherwise! 😉 Thanks!
I like this, Leo. Very poignant haiku. I can feel one wanting to cry faster than the rain with one’s heart breaking. The summer rain is all alone, too.
@ Margaret,
Yes, the summer rain is all alone too. Very right..
So beautiful and so melancholy =) Wonderful job!
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@ MindLoveMisery,
Thanks! 🙂 Glad you liked it..
tears… wonderful haiku..
Someone is Special
@ SiS,
Thanks!
Beautiful words! We sometimes find solitude when we are hurting, before our tears have finished falling. So much depth in this Haiku.
@ Dan,
Thanks a lot. Yes, we sometimes find we are lonely in hurt.
Very beautiful! The final longing is sweetly sad!
@ Gemma,
Thanks very much 🙂 Glad you liked it.
12 words, 3 lines yet filled with depth.
Little yet filled with volume.
Keep it up! 🙂
@ Clariice,
Thanks! 🙂
I love the depth of this haiku.
@ Antara,
Thanks! 🙂
well..you reminded me what someone has said… a friend is one who can recognise tears in rain water..
@ Ramesh Sood,
So true Rji 🙂 so very true!
A sweet connection between emotions and nature’s beauty. Very nice!
@ Judith,
Many thanks.. glad you liked it 🙂
Very nice imagery, Leo!! 🙂
BTW – the green background is simple but very soothing!!
@ Becca,
I’ve been an admirer of simple background for a while now 😀
oh . that was so so sad !
@ Lady Nimue,
Yeah, it was 🙁