Remain true..

Remain respectful of respected elders who remain rebellious of your relished reveries, giving you no rest or relief from regrets of ruined reveries in the past, no rain of joy as you revel in your achievements and no remorse in their soul as they return to your replay your unpleasant past. If today you could not reason with success, let it remain; after all, tomorrow is another day that comes with hopes resplendent like the rising sun. Reincarnation of your reveries is in your reach, always, but read not the despair they try to render in your heart and reflect their heartless ways; once you remain out of reach of their mist of hopelessness, your rightful smiles will establish a rapport with you that will remain true till you believe in yourself.


Shared at ABC Wednesday (Round of R words) and Carry on Tuesday.

Illustration from Moonbuggy, Random Images.


© Leo 17/05/2011

Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.

24 thoughts on “Remain true..

  1. WOWWWWW!!!!
    We really need to learn to write from you…For starters, how to use different forms of writing..and secondly how to use the best choice of words to weave standstill sense and essence..!! Beautiful, the choice of ‘R’…Guess, I should try such forms too!

    • @ Fiducia,

      This form? It’s just a paragraph. Nothing else 😉 Glad you liked it and felt the words used made standstill sense and had essence to it. 😀 Thanks very much.

  2. “…who remain rebellious of your relished reveries, giving you no rest or relief from regrets of ruined reveries in the past”. The alliteration expert. 😀 Good work, good work Leo. You are the expert.

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