If Only I Had The Time…

  

68 thoughts on “If Only I Had The Time…”

1. Beautiful words…and a great poem…

   “Trapped, in two words,
   “If only”, my life passes
   Momentarily its wishes
   Etched in a sand grain”

   These lines I super-like… 🙂

   • thanks, Sumit.. glad u liked the poem.. and those particular lines..

2. Fantastic Write Up Leo!!

   • thanks Creativity 🙂

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4. Looks sad 🙁 and defeatism is acceptance of defeat without struggle 🙁 I hate those two words “if only”. 🙁 The best line here is “Impossible, they aren’t” 🙂 and incomplete dreams await to emerge into reality 🙂 and it can never be too late to start.

   Best Wishes as always Leo!! 😀

   • yeah, I hate them too.. but it happens sometimes and that trapped feeling is terrible to have, Nanka 🙁 I’ll come out of it soon if I get trapped, thats for sure.. 😀

5. Brilliant! “If only I had the time”…yes that thought crosses my mind often.

   Loved this verse:
   “Hard done by each tick
   Against me, lost these
   Desires seem within me”

   I know exactly how that feels… 🙂

   • yeah.. it crosses a lot of minds often, Deadpoet.. 🙂 glad u liked the poem 😀

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7. Very good Lines
   Nice thoughts
   Here’s mine poetry
   http://ashbeezone.wordpress.com/2010/12/10/love-is/
   !! Happy Rally !!

   • thanks Ashbee 🙂

8. I totally enjoy “acrostiche’ and you do those so well. A message within a message…I do hope you take the time to make the dreams come true IF this is about you 🙂 (it rhymes lol)
   http://lynnaima.wordpress.com/2010/12/16/onward-to-oblivion/

   • yeah.. a message within a message, it is a beautiful form of poetry for sure, Lynn 🙂 and it sort of can be related to by many na? It is sort of mine too, and hopefully, I can time it 🙂

9. only if we all had time…nice write

   • yes, Muted Poet.. if only…

10. If only I have the time,
    smart acrostic, what a cute mixture of dreams and reality.
    magical writing…
    Thanks for sharing…

    🙂

    • thank you Jingle. glad u liked it and it was a pleasure to share 🙂

11. Wow!! This was indeed a treat to read!

    • thanks very much, Thomas.. glad u liked the read 🙂

12. I especially like these lines:
    Long have the stitching
    Yearned for unraveling
    Don’t we all just want to unravel some time?!
    Thanks!

    • yes.. we all do want to at some time or another, Cloaked Monk 🙂 glad u liked it.

13. Once, woven by threads
    Nestled deep in mind
    Long have the stitching
    Yearned for unraveling

    An amazing write…took me to a point of deep reflection.
    Thank you for sharing.

    • thank you very much, MereMortal 🙂 glad u liked the poem and that it made u reflect on it.

14. This poem is great!
    Has so much…
    And
    Nicely composed
    Kind of
    Sensational.

    • wow.. an acrostic reply to my acrostic 😀 thanks Ina. glad u liked it and felt it great. 🙂

15. Beautiful Leo…If only…Sigh…So many dreams and our imaginations are a victim of this If only..

    • yep Tweety, lots of dreams are victimized for sure. glad u liked the poem.. 🙂

16. “If only” ain’t that the truth. So many thoughts cross my mind with that beginning. But this poems sets them free. Good job!

    http://mysticmarleei.wordpress.com/2010/12/16/you/

    • thanks, Marlee 🙂 glad u liked it and that u felt it was a poem that sets the thoughts free 😀

17. The last verse really summed it up well.
    Great write.

    • thanks, Booguloo 🙂

18. Magial, beautiful work Leo.. As usual you are the best…………

    –Someone is Special–

    • thanks SiS.

19. it’s lovely.. I like it

    • thank you Seoulaja 🙂

20. “trapped in two words–if only”
    LOVE this.
    Seriously amazing

    • yeah.. we all, at some time or the other, have been trapped in those two words, haven’t we Shea? 🙂 glad u liked the poem.

21. Being a fiber artist, I like your use of words.

    • thanks very much, athursdayschild 🙂

22. This is a strong poem. Great job I really like the line “Talismanic, my dreams
    Hiding themselves, an Emergence they await”

    • thanks very much, Kristen 🙂

23. very beautiful

    • thank you, Glory 🙂

24. Amazing work!

    • thanks, TnL..

25. Lovely Poem
    Like The Linkaging

    Dreams……….. To Pursue ……………
    If I only had Time …………………………..
    If I Only had Timeeeeeeeeeeeee …………

    • thanks very much, Infiniterainbow. 🙂

26. Perfectly written, love your words and style as always=P

    • thanks as always, Riikz 😀

27. You captured the “If Only” so well. Marvelous write, Leo.

    JP

    http://tasithoughts.wordpress.com/2010/12/17/where-are-you/

    • thanks very much, Tasi. glad u liked it, I will drop by soon. 🙂 I’m having a lot of pending reads at Rally already..

28. Wonderfully realised idea, loved it!

    • glad u liked it, Roy. thank you for stopping by.

29. ohmigawsh. How did you manage to write with my writing voice through the lens of my experience? Phenomenal, Leo. THANK YOU!

    • wow. you mean I thought at JJ level? gosh, I didn’t think I was even close to that 🙂 thanks Julie 😀 glad u liked it.

30. I love your creativity when it comes to the first letter of each line making a downward statement. talk about thinking outside the box, plus the last line is excellent. thanks for posting.

    • thank you very much, Shaun. glad you liked it and found it to be creative 🙂

31. If only…nice write.

    • thank you, Dasuntoucha 🙂 glad u liked it.

32. I love how you’ve made this childish structure so very adult.

    • thanks McGregor 🙂 glad u liked it.

33. I like the use of form here– interesting write!

    • thank u, Marilynn 🙂

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