What difference
A day can make
In the fast paced
Life of apprentice
Where each day
New experiences
Teach life quickest
Leading to golden
Future’s pathway
What difference
A day can make
In the fast paced
Life of apprentice
Tricks of the trade
Learnt in a trice
Where hard work
No compromise
Earns the praise
In the field, tricks
If learnt right, can
Abet higher flight
Confidence soars
With that practice
In the fast paced
Life of apprentice
What difference
A day can make
Submitted to
One Single Impression – #143 – Apprentice
Sunday Scribblings – #242 – What A Difference A Day Makes
Image: Scriptorium Apprentice, painting by Patrick Hiatt. From Google Images/Fine Art America
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing to me are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
I like your use of repetition to drive the poem on..it gave the sense of learning (beautiful picture too – did you write the poem before or after you saw the picture?) Jae
well said….interesting pic!
thanks a lot, Sandra 🙂
thank you very much, Jae 🙂 glad u liked it.. I saw the picture after I wrote the poem… 🙂
Galing mo talga leo….
Hi Haisley.. is that Filipino? what does it mean?
Learning the intricacies from a master and readying for the future confidently, truly a great difference it can make 🙂
yes, it does indeed make a great difference, Nanka 😀 glad u liked the poem..
This is great! Truly each day of an apprentice is important.
Mine is here. http://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/2010/11/20/apprentice/
howdy, Teresa.. glad u liked it.. yes, each day is important for sure…
Yes Leo, each day is important. There is a lot to learn.
yes.. very much, lots to learn, Harshad.. glad u liked it..
Well described… expressing the importance of each moment as an apprentice, lending to days making differences in time.
thanks very much, Reflections.. 🙂 glad you liked the post.. each moment does make a difference to an apprentice…
Each day brings new lessons…well said. I love the image you posted also!
thank you very much, Sweetest in the Gale. glad you liked it, and the image 🙂
A day can make a whole lot of difference. 🙂 The picture and the poem goes very well together.
thank you very much, Wordsworth Millions.. yes, a whole lot of difference for sure 🙂
Wow, this is really cool
thanks very much, Severny 😀
beautiful wonders.
a day can make a huge difference, if one is willing to change.
yes, the will is essential too, Jingle 🙂 glad u liked it.
Clever piece!
thanks, Tumblewords 🙂
I am sure this is true.
Fun to read your poem.
thanks, Tammie 🙂 was nice to read ur comment too..
It does make much difference Leo…even just a second can make a difference…
A very touching poem dear….
thanks, Amity 🙂
very true.
thanks, Trisha.. 🙂
One day.. oh I have found it matter so much.. in learning.. had been dealing with apprentices Leo actually .. but always felt to be one among them.. each day..matters for learning..
Thanks Leo , you have a way to put it..
yes, it does matter a lot, R’ji.. each day.. glad u liked the way I put it.
I hadn’t really thought about this before, so thank you for the new thoughts!
welcome very mch, Carina 🙂
I liked how you used the image as your inspiration. A great and humbling reminder that we are all life’s apprentices and have much to learn!
yes, very much so, Ceebie 🙂
Often I wonder if this would be better than college due to its very nature. Great poem Leo.
glad u liked it, 2ZP.. yes.. I wonder that at times too.
Some days I feel like an apprentice even after 26 years inmy job- well done!!!
thanks, Patti.
wonderful piece of poetry..!!!
thanks Yamini.
sometimes it takes a lifetime to learn the way….
yes.. it does, Ms. Pie 🙂
You’ve woven the prompts together like a master.
thanks Lilibeth 🙂 glad u liked it.
You’ve woven the three prompts together like a master.
thanks Lilibeth 🙂