My first friend she is
Affectionate her words, touch
No pause in caring
My support in gloom
Cheerleader in my success
She taught me to fly
Her patience profound
She listens when I talk, her
Love for me, endless
Her hand clasps mine tight
Eternal is my first love
My darling mother
Submitted to:
Haiku Heights – #16 – Clasp
One Single Impression – #141 – Pause
One Shot Wednesday at One Stop Poetry
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I loved it leo… ๐ ๐ it was beautiful ๐ our mother..such a wonderful creation of god isn’t it?
yeah.. best creation ๐ glad you loved it, Tweety ๐
What a beautiful tribute to your mother–loved it
thanks very much, Angela ๐
A great tribute to your mother and to all mothers….
Amazing haikus… ๐
thanks very much, Sumit ๐
What a wonderful tribute to your mom. I love this series of haiku.
Mine is here. http://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/2010/11/06/haiku-heights-clasp/
thanks very much, Teresa.. glad u liked the haiku series ๐
Awwww…that is so sweet.
thanks, Ann ๐
awe this is a beautiful poem leo!!! kudos!!! thanks for sharing!
thanks for reading, Ms. Peaches ๐ glad u liked it..
A beautiful idea that you Mum is your first friend and first love! Wonderful haikus!
but its not an idea, Gemma.. its the true thing.. ๐ she is my first friend and first love ๐
Heyy Leo,
I thought I was making my son a mumma’s boy but now I see another one already there!! ๐
Nice one on the prompt. Now ill have to write something equally well..:)
hey Vibz, of course I am ๐ I think boys will always love their mum a lot, a fierce protective sort of affection and love is always there.. proud to have such a mum ๐
Casper will be feeling the same too, now and later as well ๐
First love is always the mother with everybody.
Reader in me was expecting samething from your first girlfreind, but suddenly meaning of love changed at end.
Great art.
Hi Dr. Madan.. yeah, always the mom ๐ I know that expectation.. ๐ Glad you liked the art ๐
Woww!!!!! Extremely Touching Leo ๐ ๐ You have very well said about Mother’s Love ๐ ๐
thanks Creativity ๐ glad u liked it..
AN APPRECIATION! LOVE THIS. A GREAT MEMOIRS TO MOTHERS
thanks very much, Ogung ๐ glad you liked it..
So lovely Leo. Such beautiful imagery. Nice….
thanks Shail ๐
wow…wonderfully written…!!!
perfect haiku for the perfect lady…!!!
nice one Leo..!!!
thanks Ms. Meduri.. glad yu found it perfect ๐
True. So true..
nothingness
thank u Gautami ๐
A lovely tribute.
thanks Anthony sir ๐
Oh, this is so beautiful and inspiring too, dear..
thanks Rameshji ๐ glad u liked it..
so true….wonderful words!
thank you, Sandra ๐
Mother… eternal love.
Beautiful piece.
thanks Harshadji ๐
Such a wonderful tribute to your mother… we all should pause and reflect on this.
yeah.. thank you, Reflections ๐
What a lovely tribute Leo! I miss my mom, every day. Hugs…
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thank you very much, Geraldine ๐
what a lovely tribute to your mother
thank you very much, Rene ๐
cute !
thanks Lady nimue ๐
Divine!! Makes me wanna call Mom RIGHT NOW!! But it must be only $AM in India…grrrr
Never mind!! Will do it a few hours later ๐
Leo, this poem is just the FINEST tribute to all moms!!! Loved this li’l ode!
oops… i meant 4AM! “Shift” key goofups! ๐
no problem.. u must be sleepy, Kavi ๐ ๐
thank you very much, Kavi ๐ glad u liked that ode… have a nice conversation with your mom ๐
Love it! So true! ๐
thank you, River ๐
smiles. what a beautiful thing the love of a mother to her child…nicely said…
thank you very much, Brian.. yes, that love is the most priceless I feel ๐
This is just beautiful.
thanks very much, Talon.. ๐
A beautiful tribute to a mother’s love…blessings…bkm
thanks very much, Mackenzie.. ๐ glad you liked it…
Hi this is lovely. It is touching in every way and what a tribute to your mother.
I wrote a haiku set today too..what a co-incidence! Thanks, Gay @beachanny
will come read ur haiku set soon, Cannon ๐ glad you liked mine…
how sweet! What a great one shot. refreshing!
Miranda<3
thanks very much Miranda ๐ glad you liked it..
A very loving and soft poem, Leo. Thanks for sharing your mother’s love with us all.
thanks a lot, Hedgewitch.. her love is precious for sure ๐
a sweet reflection on a mother daughter(or son) love
thanks
thank you too, Moondustwriter ๐
Warm n’ fuzzy, effective.
thank u, Steve ๐
I just knew you were talking about a mother’s love! You captured it perfectly! That is exactly how I feel about my mother. Great one shot!
yes of course, Laura ๐ first love for all of us is a mother’s love ๐ glad u liked the one shot..
No one can ever the place of our mother…
certainity of the uncertainity
true, Gautami.. very true! ๐
The love of a mother is a powerful and beautiful thing…love this Leo! ๐
powerful, and beautiful.. thats very much for sure.. thank u Carrie ๐
Oh crap! Is it Mother’s Day already? (Runs out the door to buy flowers)
lol.. come on, Eric.. do we need a day to write on our mother’s love? ๐
wonderful haikus…great tributes to a mom…thanks for sharing…pete
thank you Pete ๐ glad u liked the tribute ๐
oh! thats too lovely….loved it a lot ๐
thank you, Uma… ๐
Its very sweet.. I enjoyed it very much.. thanks for sharing…
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thank u very much, for reading, Shashi ๐
I enjoyed that merry banter between you and Vibzz!! ๐ ๐
u didnt enjoy the haikus, Rumz? ๐
Just watching from the sidelines…all the pleasantries!! Proud mothers, Vibzz and Me too ๐
yeah.. both u n her have fine babies, Nanku.. ๐