Afterlife

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1. amazing 🙂

   • thanks Choco 🙂

2. Nice take on the prompt. Great Mag. Love and Light, Sender

   • thanks Sender! 🙂

3. we never know where we will land in – heaven or hell… 🙂
   nwonderfully penned.

   • so true, Raji 🙂 glad u liked it..!

4. Beautiful fantastic!!!!!!!!

   • thanks Creativity 🙂

5. So imaginative! I like going to Heaven or Hell based on what you did!

   • yeah, me too, Diane.. just as long as its not a split verdict 😉

6. Is this what happens? I believe so.

   Wonderful piece of penmanship.

   • I believe so too, Barbara! 🙂 glad you liked the penmanship!

7. Hi Leo,
   Phew, I hope those poor souls don’t have to wait too long to find out which direction they’ll be going.

   Thanks for taking The NaiSaiKu Challenge?!!!

   • yeah, me too hopes that Andy 🙂 glad to see NaiSaiKu return 🙂

8. This is such a good poem.
   i like how you put it in wit the image

   • thanks Severny 🙂 glad you liked the poem! 😀

9. This is wonderful. I like the mirror format.

   Mine is here. http://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/2010/10/28/magpie/

   • thanks Teresa.. glad you liked the mirror format..! 🙂

10. I’m thinking I like “road to heaven”. ;^)

    • I like that too, Willow 😉

11. Very nice.

    • thanks Melissa 🙂

12. Nice how the words are on the image. I like how this repeats!

    • thanks Ana, glad u liked it 🙂

13. Wonderful words! A lot said in a few words.

    All the best,
    MS

    • thanks MS 🙂 glad yu liked it

14. um can i choose which exit we take on this bus? smiles.

    • hehe.. no idea, Brian 🙂

15. I hope we would be able to make that choice 🙂
    Liked the way lines repeat themselves

    and yeah, like the new look of your blog as well

    • hi Abhilasha.. yeah, I hope so too 🙂 glad u liked the NaiSaiKu form.. and the new look too.. thanks a lot! 😀

16. Nice Naisaiku!

    • thanks Tumblewords! 🙂

17. Heaven for me I hope!! Like the structure of your poem…very clever!

    • thanks Katherine 🙂

18. Your naisaiku is like a mirror relecting the two worlds we exist in at all times, even now, living flesh, not yet buried beneath stone. Thanks for sharing 🙂

    • thanks for visiting, Shaista 🙂 glad u liked the NaiSaiKu 😀

19. I really like the form of this piece, nicely done. Thanks for the good wishes for NaNoWriMo!

    • thanks Patience 😀 welcome to my blog, and welcome for those wishes 🙂

20. Very nice poem. Got to admit I’d never heard of naisaiku. I’ll have to give that a try sometime.

    • its fun, Linda 😀 do try 🙂 glad u liked mine..

21. Great post!

    • thanks, Kathe! 🙂

22. Love the structure of this write. Great mag! Touching words to lead us down the road…

    • glad u liked the poem, Reflections 🙂

23. Im reading this after your post on Z for Zombies
    And it feels like a series, a prequel to what came later!!!
    The Hallow eeeeeen chill continues to run down my spine..:P

    • hehe.. chill series, eh Vibz? 😉 glad u liked it.

24. This is cool — it works visually, as well. Waiting directions!

    • hope u find them, Karen 🙂

25. Didn’t anyone offer the poor souls a map??? They would’ve got to their destination faster… 😉

    • lol 😀 yeah.. would’ve been useful that, Rumz.. maybe there was a map shop in the station.. 😉

26. Please God,
    Lead kindly those souls to Heaven!! 🙂

    • amen to that, Nanku 😉

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