Submitted to:
Magpie Tales – #38
The NaiSaiKu Challenge? – Oct2010/1
Image given by Willow at Magpie Tales
52 thoughts on “Afterlife”
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I live in words
Submitted to:
Magpie Tales – #38
The NaiSaiKu Challenge? – Oct2010/1
Image given by Willow at Magpie Tales
Comments are closed.
amazing 🙂
thanks Choco 🙂
Nice take on the prompt. Great Mag. Love and Light, Sender
thanks Sender! 🙂
we never know where we will land in – heaven or hell… 🙂
nwonderfully penned.
so true, Raji 🙂 glad u liked it..!
Beautiful fantastic!!!!!!!!
thanks Creativity 🙂
So imaginative! I like going to Heaven or Hell based on what you did!
yeah, me too, Diane.. just as long as its not a split verdict 😉
Is this what happens? I believe so.
Wonderful piece of penmanship.
I believe so too, Barbara! 🙂 glad you liked the penmanship!
Hi Leo,
Phew, I hope those poor souls don’t have to wait too long to find out which direction they’ll be going.
Thanks for taking The NaiSaiKu Challenge?!!!
yeah, me too hopes that Andy 🙂 glad to see NaiSaiKu return 🙂
This is such a good poem.
i like how you put it in wit the image
thanks Severny 🙂 glad you liked the poem! 😀
This is wonderful. I like the mirror format.
Mine is here. http://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/2010/10/28/magpie/
thanks Teresa.. glad you liked the mirror format..! 🙂
I’m thinking I like “road to heaven”. ;^)
I like that too, Willow 😉
Very nice.
thanks Melissa 🙂
Nice how the words are on the image. I like how this repeats!
thanks Ana, glad u liked it 🙂
Wonderful words! A lot said in a few words.
All the best,
MS
thanks MS 🙂 glad yu liked it
um can i choose which exit we take on this bus? smiles.
hehe.. no idea, Brian 🙂
I hope we would be able to make that choice 🙂
Liked the way lines repeat themselves
and yeah, like the new look of your blog as well
hi Abhilasha.. yeah, I hope so too 🙂 glad u liked the NaiSaiKu form.. and the new look too.. thanks a lot! 😀
Nice Naisaiku!
thanks Tumblewords! 🙂
Heaven for me I hope!! Like the structure of your poem…very clever!
thanks Katherine 🙂
Your naisaiku is like a mirror relecting the two worlds we exist in at all times, even now, living flesh, not yet buried beneath stone. Thanks for sharing 🙂
thanks for visiting, Shaista 🙂 glad u liked the NaiSaiKu 😀
I really like the form of this piece, nicely done. Thanks for the good wishes for NaNoWriMo!
thanks Patience 😀 welcome to my blog, and welcome for those wishes 🙂
Very nice poem. Got to admit I’d never heard of naisaiku. I’ll have to give that a try sometime.
its fun, Linda 😀 do try 🙂 glad u liked mine..
Great post!
thanks, Kathe! 🙂
Love the structure of this write. Great mag! Touching words to lead us down the road…
glad u liked the poem, Reflections 🙂
Im reading this after your post on Z for Zombies
And it feels like a series, a prequel to what came later!!!
The Hallow eeeeeen chill continues to run down my spine..:P
hehe.. chill series, eh Vibz? 😉 glad u liked it.
This is cool — it works visually, as well. Waiting directions!
hope u find them, Karen 🙂
Didn’t anyone offer the poor souls a map??? They would’ve got to their destination faster… 😉
lol 😀 yeah.. would’ve been useful that, Rumz.. maybe there was a map shop in the station.. 😉
Please God,
Lead kindly those souls to Heaven!! 🙂
amen to that, Nanku 😉