The Knocks!

Messy Miss Tigger, wet her fur
Went to dry with one sad purr
Knock knock, on her little den
Opened she, her door then
And promptly became wetter

Forgot she, to close the tap
Ended up with some mishap
On broken cup, Missus Mouse
Dry whiskers, and wet blouse
Gave the tigger a tight slap

Knock knock, went door again
Mommy Owl, shocked in pain
Entered kitchen, saw the mess
Hooted in fury, dear God bless
Tigger, innocence don’t u feign!


For Lots of Laughter – #9 – Knock Knock


Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.

24 thoughts on “The Knocks!”

  1. That was the cutest and nicest little poem I have read in a long time. ๐Ÿ™‚ Could completely relate to it. ๐Ÿ˜‰ and I love the Mommy Owl hooting ๐Ÿ˜€ So very much like me….but…I love the expression on the tiggy face…feigning innocence….LOL ๐Ÿ˜€

  2. Welcome back to LOL Cap’n!! ๐Ÿ˜‰ Seeing you after a looong break (humor block is quite common in the open seas). ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ˜‰
    I love these little limericks you’ve put together for the crew to LOL at. You’re doing great!! ๐Ÿ˜€ Keep sailing…and keep afloat!! ๐Ÿ™‚

    I have one teensy little question…who is this Missus Mouse?? She’s abusing the li’l tiggy ๐Ÿ™

    Hope to see you sailing with us again next week. Bon voyage!!! ๐Ÿ˜€

    • I never left LoL Rumz ๐Ÿ˜ฎ a welcome back is ok.. but I never took a loooooong break, I wrote for last time too..! ๐Ÿ˜›
      glad you liked the limerick set ๐Ÿ™‚ and could LoL.. you’re keeping me ship afloat, keep up the stellar job ๐Ÿ™‚ I’m always floating ๐Ÿ˜›

      Mrs. Mouse? she’s the resident tenant of Tigger’s house ๐Ÿ˜› she doesn’t know Mrs. Mouse exists though.. she still thinks she’s imaginary ๐Ÿ˜‰ ๐Ÿ˜€

      I’ll see about next week though.. Boin Voyagie ๐Ÿ˜‰

  3. WOW, I was putting faces on the different characters and visualising and LOLing the same time. The comments above from Rumz, Nanka and you above just confirmed that my imagination was on track and your writing is well-inspired! LOL for sure..:D

  4. Simply hilarious! What a fantastic poem! Bravo!

    Shubho bijoyadashami (Happy Vijayadashami)! May the blessings of the Goddess shower down on you and your loved ones forever.

  5. Ah leo I loved it….i mean just simply loved it…it was soooo cute leo…i mean that’s so me…after doing all the mischief, i do have that innocent face saying I don’t know who did this ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€ awsome leo…

    by the way i like the template…

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