Morning Mist

  

102 thoughts on “Morning Mist”

1. Absolutely lovely. Your picture is as misty magical as your poem.

   • thanks Photowannabe 🙂 glad you liked the poetic image too 😀

2. I’ll love you and leave you
   Wait for magnificent night
   To bring me back to you

   that’s very cool write here….
   Thanks for the magical work.

   • thanks for magically dropping by too, Jingle 😀

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     awards for you.

     • thanks Jingle 🙂

3. Very touching – love what you have created for M.

   • hi Hildred, many thanks! 🙂 glad you liked it!

4. Wonderful post for the M Day! Love the Misty Morning capture! And such beautiful words to match! Hope your week is going well!

   Sylvia

   • hi Sylvia 🙂 glad you liked the capture of the misty morning!

5. Beautiful shot. I love the mystery of morning mist and fog. I also liked your poem.

   • thank u very much, Carver.. for both mystery and poem liking 😉

6. A beautiful cycle in this. Excellently done.

   • thanks a lot, Anthony sir! 😀

7. That’s gorgeous.

   • thank u very much, AJ 🙂

8. This is the perfect poem for a mysterious misty morning! Strangely I like mist( same word in Dutch), because it hides the other world behind the white cloud.
   Thanks for your visit and kind words.

   • thanks Wil.. 🙂 yeah, it’d be a lovely misty morning for sure! 😀

9. i had no knowledge of this form but i liked this very much! thank you! you helped me learn something new and fed my soul with beauty 🙂

   • thanks very much, Liliana for dropping by & appreciating the poem.. 🙂 glad to have fed your soul with beauty!

10. I am not able to leave a comment about this poem, except that I like it. Thank you for sharing it, and also for visiting my blog!

    • thanks Dimple 🙂 glad you liked it

11. Oh, that my lover could stay just a few minutes longer. Loved your poem of Ms today.

    • thanks very much, Ann 🙂 maybe he will 😉 ask him..! 😀

12. Perfect!

    • thanks, Tumblewords! 🙂

13. Nice, I could see this illustrated in someway.
    Peace
    Gil

    • thanks, Gillis 😀 hope so too 😉

14. nice poem. but LOVE the mist.
    ROG, ABC Wednesday team

    • thanks ROG 😀 eeven me 😉

15. love the mixture of voices an how you used the color to seperate them and commentate…very nicely done with the form…great one shot! now i depart before the mist…smiles.

    • thanks Brian 🙂 glad you liked both verse and its presentation 😀 happy mist to you 😉

16. Ah, this strikes me as wonderfully romantic. Beautiful images throughout.

    • thank u very much, Mary 🙂 glad you liked the overall image! 😀

17. I do like the dramatic flow.

    • thanks very much, Ben 🙂

18. This does an excellent job of setting the feeling. I love the M words you have chosen.

    Mine is here. http://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/2010/10/12/one-shot-wednesday-week-15/

    • thanks Teresa 🙂 glad you liked the M words and the feeling!

19. Wow Leo, this is so beautiful -“who owns the maiden’s heart” – absolutely love that image…this is my favorite of yours….so magical –beautiful piece…bkm

    • thanks Mackie 🙂 glad you loved it.. thanks also for saying it is your favorite of mine till date! 🙂

20. Beautiful love story and the entreaties of the lady are so soulful.
    Her pleas are very gracefully answered by her beau to meet again at night.

    Night has enchanting descriptions in your poem an Aubade very well written.
    You can feel her love for him and his delicate complex understanding of her emotions.

    Made an excellent read in this form of poetry.

    • yeah.. the aubade is dramatic to such an effect, Nanka 🙂 glad you could feel the beautiful love story! yeah.. he wants to meet her at night too! 😀 it’s one of my favorite forms, this is the third one I’ve written! 🙂

21. Lovely photo – just draws you into it. 😀

    • thanks very much, Leslie 😀 glad u liked the photo and the poem!

22. This is very romantic – so youthful – thank you!

    • thanks Amy 🙂 glad you liked the poem!

23. “make the world
    Dance before our eyes”

    Has a windswept romantic quality I found enjoyable. Nice One Shot!

    • 🙂 thanks very much, Adam 😀 glad you enjoyed the poem..

24. Impressive! Have a great day!

    • thanks, and you have a great day too, Lani 🙂

25. Vinay, beautiful poem.

    • thanks, Rajesh! 😀

26. Dear friend,
    Once again I must say you are very talented and creative, so lovely poem, with a romantic feeling and the picture is also precious!
    Congratulations! 🙂
    Léia

    • thank you very much Leia 😀 glad you liked the feeling and the picture 😉

27. There is something gently honorific within this piece that touched me. I also enjoy your creative and innovative use of italics here. Nicely done, Leo.

    Warmest Salad

    Luke @ WordsSalad

    • hehe 🙂 the italicized M words lend an effect, as well as indicate the M words, literally! 😉 glad you liked the poem, Luke! 😀

28. brilliant would also be an understatement for this Leo… the way u went about with every line, every word – it was just amazing….

    //Outstanding line:
    Madly in love, I am now
    Night, the maestro, plays
    Our tune; stay my darling
    Let us entice the morning
    To continue the mystery
    Unite again, as magnolias
    Blossom and magpies cry
    Beyond; make the world
    Dance before our eyes

    keep them coming buddy…

    Cheers!
    Tavish

    • oh, I’ll definitely keep em coming Tavish! 🙂 thanks for the praise and for stopping by! 🙂

29. stolen love is always full of passion, yearning and fear. very beautifully portrayed all the colours.

    • thanks very much, Trisha! 😀

30. They ought to quit all that sneaking around and just elope! (LOL!) An interesting style to your One Shot, Leo!

    • lol 😀 they’re having fun with the sneaking around I guess, Eric 😉 glad you liked the Aubade style!

31. These is the reason why I like getting up early to catch a morning mist.
    ABC Wednesday

    • haha 🙂 likewise, Kim.. likewise.. just need the maiden and meadow, and I’m set 😉 😀

32. I am impressed! That was simply beautiful! I’ve never read this poetic form…thanks for introducing me to it…what a killer job you did!

    • thanks Annie 🙂 glad you liked the aubade 😀 thanks for dropping by! 🙂

33. The passion of the lovers, the secrecy, and the danger is all displayed in this poem. The style is excellent. The wording great. Very impressive. Well done!

    • hi Dan.. thanks very much 😀 glad u liked it! 🙂

34. This reminds me of Juliet’s “Hark! It is the nightingale and not the lark…”

    • thank u, Granny Smith 🙂

35. Leo, Awesome poem. the way it started and ended.. chanceless man.. You have taught a new form to me.. Thanks for it.. Lovely message this poem carries..

    I expected more pics according to the para.. it would added much more beauty and made it divine..

    –Someone Is Special–

    • I don’t put images in middle of poetry SiS. it loses the flow then I feel. glad you loved the poem.. I didn’t intend a message with it though!

36. Now this is Super awesome! I was thinking about getting up and stretching when I suddenly came across this.. and it was like a shower! Lovely!! :))

    • happy shower to you Purvi 😉 glad you liked the poem! 😀

37. ..the maestro plays our tune…this is lovely
    interesting poem form with the conversation
    …make the world dance before our eyes…
    some very nice words and imagery you use in your lines..great one shot

    • hi Claudia 🙂 many thanks.. glad you liked the poem 😀

38. This is a wonderful poem and I like the pic that goes so well with it.

    • thanks KB 🙂 glad you liked the poem and the picture! 😀

39. oiiee new form :O
    never even heard of it 🙂
    nice narration and poem though 😉

    • thanks n glad you liked it Meghu 🙂

40. I thought this was an interesting and beautiful poem. Well handled. I didn’t know and aubade defined this type of poem. I have a poem about a child that was set in the early morning that I named Aubade for Anna; but perhaps it’s mistitled if it should be a love poem. I never knew that. But I think you did a very good job with this one. Thanks, Gay @beachanny

    • Aubade is usually romantic, since it is a dialog between lovers, Holly Heir! perhaps the child poem was mistitled 🙂 it is possible 😀 glad you liked how I took this one! 🙂

41. Beautiful piece you’ve got here, very romantic. Delightful imagery throughout, and wonderful phrasings…truly puts the poem to vision before our eyes. Lovely stuff!

    • thanks Chris. glad you liked the imagery and visual effect of the poem 😀 thanks for stopping by!

42. As always Leo… poetic perfection. Love and Light, Sender

    • thanks very much, Sender! 🙂

43. ah.. morning’s love life! 😀 the poem gives such an impact, friend! 🙂 good one!

    • glad u liked it, RJW!

44. What a beautiful one.. the mist was definitely magical.. 😉
    I was almost transported to a wonderful dreamland.. would you give Company? LOLss
    Very well written My Friend- I am still dreaming- somebody- Pinch Me.. xox

    • sure.. Pinch to Olivia 😀 LOL!

      glad u liked the take.. dnt sleep too long 😉

45. I like this form. Lovely images, romantic, very nice.

    • thanks Suzicate!

46. So much to learn about poetry from you Leo
    Beautifu poem! Nice choice of misty-image.
    Best wishes,
    Anna

    My cat Sara would feel very honoured if you visited her ABC-Wed. M post:
    Sara Cat’s abcWED-round-7-M

    Sara admires your poems.

    • hi Anna, glad you liked the misty image and my words! 🙂

      I visited Sara’s ode to a content cat and her nemesis 🙂

47. Lovely…Leo, dreamy, timeless and romantic!
    A new form for me and I look forward to giving it a go.

    • nice 🙂 do tr it, and lemme know the link, Giovanni.. I’d like to read! 😀

48. awesome poem – I really love the style – very creative and romantic

    • hi Gabriela, thank you very much.. glad you liked the Aubade form! 🙂

49. fantastic conversation…lovely read 🙂

    • thanks Caty! 🙂 glad you liked the read.. 😀

50. this was a fabulous poem fiend, very skilled 🙂

    • thanks very much, William Manson 🙂 glad you liked it!

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