Lone heart on tree,
Sign of true love; or is it
Blemish to beauty?
For One Single Impression – #137 – Lonely
For Haiku Heights – #12 – Blemish
Image Source: HERE
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Lone heart on tree,
Sign of true love; or is it
Blemish to beauty?
For One Single Impression – #137 – Lonely
For Haiku Heights – #12 – Blemish
Image Source: HERE
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Leo, its all the way you look at it. True love but not the right place to leave its stamp!
yeah, perhaps so, Harshadji 🙂
Oh, this is so well put Leo..you made me speechless.. thanks..and yes, you guided me on writing Haikus..do visit my post and let me know if I am keeping your confidence.. thanks!
thanks Ramesh ji.. and will visit along with the HH & OSI bloghops..! 🙂
Oh, teeners would ‘just wanna have fun’ caricaturing or etching their true love on trees… 🙂
Reminds me of high school days, my classmate got a scolding because on a tree trunk he wrote “I Love You Ma’am Duck”! 😛 to a teacher who walks like a duck… 😛 😀
You know what will happen next? 😛
teeners? 😮 I’m not used to that colloquial I think 😛 glad u liked the ku though..!
PS: you walk like a duck, Amity?
Good question. Nice haiku. I like the illustration as well …
thanks, Jamie.. glad you liked the illustration too 🙂
Woww!!!! Beautiful 🙂 🙂
thanks, Creativity! 🙂
An interesting question. So lovely to cement love between a couple, but what price nature?
Nicely done.
yeah, very true, Anthony.. glad you liked it.. and d price is high I feel..
Ahhhh…..sweet!
http://www.mypoeticpath.wordpress.com
thanks very much, Geraldine 🙂
I love this! I must admit I fall on the side of saying it is a blemish to the beauty of the tree!
Mine is here. http://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/2010/10/09/blemish/
like wise, Teresa 🙂 besides, I’m not that good at carving 😀
I never thought about it in that way before…thanks for making me think of it from that viewpoint! Very clever take on the prompt.
🙂 thanks Gale.. glad you liked the take!
Very nice, a unique approach. The blemish may last longer than the love. Nicely done!
thanks C.E, glad you liked the approach.. and yes, the blemish usually does last longer!
love the image,
just posted mine,
may need an illustration to it.
😉
way to go!
😀 will check out soon, Jingle 🙂 thanks!
surely a blemish!…great take!
thanks, Naliniji..!
Blemish to beauty, of course!
dad, farther and farther away
I guess so too, Gautami! 🙂
Blemish for sure.. Lovely Haiku.. As usual you are the best in Haiku’s..
–Someone Is Special–
thanks SiS..!
Meaningful lines and desecration of anything trees or walls is really a big blot. 🙂 This haiku I hope creates awareness 🙂
yeah.. an awareness haiku 😉 nice idea, Rumz 😀
Have seen many young delinquents who desecrate public properties
and hope this Haiku spreads as a message to a larger section.
It really is a disgusting habit and thanks on highlighting on this topic.
yeah, for sure, Nanku 🙂 glad you liked the ku 🙂
Beautifully seen and written!
thanks Abigail 🙂
Lonely must be the heart… left only as one blemish.
thanks Reflections 🙂 true what u say!
It seems ironic that to express one beauty there is an impulse to desecrate another! beautifully written!
true, Gemma.. very true what you say..!
I never saw it like that, but thanks for shining a light!
I never saw it either, Sue.. it was a question.. is it a blemish, or true love? 🙂
This is one of my favorite post of yours….
love both the image and the words.
be proud of yourself, smiles!
its one of my favorites of mine too, Jingle 😉
Lovely Haiku!
thanks Uma 🙂
A crafty bit of prose – great!
thanks, A.B.. its a crafty bit of poem actually.. 😉 the haiku is a poetic form! 😀
Aawww thats like an AWARE Leo! 😀
Nice of you to spread the awareness! YO! Dont go around writing on walls!
I liked it!
Very cute! 🙂
D-U-H hehehe 😀
advising yourself, Sonu? 🙂 hehe.. I thought you wrote on walls 😛 glad you liked the haiku..!
A lot packed nto those few syllables. Like Jamie says above, good question…
Warmest Salad
Luke
thanks a lot, Luke 🙂 glad you liked it!
Cute- nicely done!
thanks very much, Patti 🙂
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/10/16/happy-birthday-wishes-to-talon/
help visit Talon to wish her a happy birthday today,
Thanks!
hi Jingle, I’m on my way.. 🙂