A Blue Moon

I wonder what’s out there
In the world past the sky
A cheesy blue moon and
Many twinkling stars shy

Are there other Earths?
Is there another little me?
Like a mirror in heaven
Like twins for me to see

Can I take teddy there?
And with him forever stay
To watch the sun rising
Each and every new day

Can I take some bread?
There’s that cheesy moon
I could be there by myself
And not return very soon

Image given at, and written for Monday’s Child – #13
Also given to Monday Poetry Potluck at Jingle Poetry

Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.

56 thoughts on “A Blue Moon”

  1. I really like this and you have portrayed a child’s thinking patterns so well – many years ago when we were shifting house I spoke to my wee son about the move and he asked if there would be a bed in the new house – your poem captures thoughts like these that children have. Excellent.

  2. Fun poem – but while I’m here, may I ask that you think about removing the word ‘forever’ in the third vers? It would help the flow of rhythm, I think… Hope you don’t mind my mentioning it? I’d like people to do they same for me, when reading my poems – it’d help me see things in a new light, therefore learn more…

    • hey, Jinksy.. πŸ™‚ no problems, its good that u mentioned it too.. I like to hear what my readers feel as well, and learn..
      will consider what u said for sure, and think of removing it.. glad u let me know..! πŸ˜€

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