Oh Tired Traveller (Haiku My Heart)

64 thoughts on “Oh Tired Traveller (Haiku My Heart)”

1. Yes, but they have to..

   timeless flies search for fries

   • hmm, yeah, they do.. but stillness of time seems boring, Gautami 🙂

2. Awesome as always… “Slow quick”..great !!!

   • yeah, that oxymoron sort of works for me 😀 glad u liked it, Abhilasha..!

3. Nice Haiku- “slow quick” perfect!

   • thank u very much, Kathe 🙂

4. … lovely haiku!

   • thanks very much, Helen 🙂

5. Nice write Leo. Love and Light, Sender

   • thanks, Sender 🙂 glad u liked it..

6. I paused here, and liked what I read.

   • glad you liked the read, David.. a pause I feel was good.. gets the essence 🙂

7. thats well written 🙂

   • thank u very much, Raji 🙂 glad u liked it..!

8. Perfect Haiku…loved the title..Haiku my heart!!! Cool!! xx

   • thanks a lot, Amanda 🙂 glad you liked the haiku and title too..!

9. I feel I have been there in my travels. Great piece. I agree it would seem boring. 🙂

   • yeah, stillness would seem boring, though it might relax too.. 🙂 glad u liked the haiku, River..!

10. Very nice, very nice!

    • thanks, Tumblewords 🙂

11. Wonderful Haiku! I love the opposites: slow/quick. Mine is here. http://razzamadazzle.wordpress.com/2010/09/16/magpie-32/

    • thank you very much, Teresa 🙂 glad u liked it…! will drop by yours on my Mag bloghop..! 🙂

12. Oh lovely…and how nice it is to linger a bit 🙂

    Rene

    • hmm.. yeah, it is nice to linger too..! 🙂 glad u liked it, Rene…!

13. yes, they do seem still in passing…very nice…bkm

    • yeah, they sure do, Mackenzie 🙂

14. The second Haiku My Heart Friday I’ve seen with an hourglass. Your description is perfect, slow, and quick. Time is that indeed. Great stuff.

    Peace.

    • yeah, I know.. someone else has done a haiku for mag too, Spadoman.. glad u liked the take on the picture 🙂

15. I loved your thought for the image.. So good and that is why you always inspire people like me.. Do stop by my take, pain..

    –Someone Is Special–

    • thanks Saravana.. glad u liked it.. will stop by soon..

16. beautiful!

    • thank u, Priyanka 🙂

17. Love the juxtaposition of the slow/quick! Nice haiku!

    • thanks a lot, Willow 🙂 glad u liked it.. thanks for the inspiration..!

18. it is amazing how the willingness to be completely present seemingly
    s l o w s
    the passing of time.
    i strive fort his.
    love the duality of
    slow/quick for falling moments.

    • thank u very much, Rebecca.. yeah, it slows the time a bit for sure.. glad u liked the duality 🙂

19. Pretty . .deep words! Beautiful post and image

    • thank u very much, Riette 🙂 glad u liked it..!

20. Still in passing – then they’re gone. Perfectly captured, lovely haiku.

    ~Deb

    • yeah.. so true what u say, Deb 🙂

21. the weary traveler…can he slow down?

    sometimes, we are weary travelers, we want to slow down on most moments but at other times, we want to be quick…ahhh…that is life…

    for we are all travelers in this world…

    • he must, or else he’ll get past the stage when time moves.. even moving time will seem still to him then, Amity..!

22. This is a really good idea.
    great haiku.
    Great image

    • thank u very much, Arts Web Show 🙂 glad u liked the haiku..!

23. Thought provoking ‘for falling moments seem still in passing’, thanks for your haiku and Magpie Tale.

    • thank u very much for reading and appreciating the post, Marilyn 🙂 glad u liked it..!

24. the paring of slow quick together was what cought me…nicely down and presented well int eh picture…nice magpie….

    • thank u very much, Brian 🙂 glad you liked the presentation.. and the oxymoron too 😀

25. wonderful is the only word left with me..!!!

    Ms.Meduri

    • thanks, Ms.Meduri.. 🙂

26. I is 1:16 a.m. and I am a tired traveler! Am going to make your lovely haiku one of my last magpie reads tonight.

    • oh.. glad u liked the ku, Lydia 🙂 sweet dreams to you..!

27. hello leo… great capture of a weary traveler’s heart… once we start to travel it is hard to stop…

    • thank u very much, Pie 🙂 glad u liked it.. yes, difficult to stop, but we’ve to..!

28. love the duality of the haiku and image – thought provoking!

    • thanks for loving both haiku and image, Tami 🙂

29. delicate Haiku!

    • thanks a lot, Ji 🙂

30. We all tire once in a while… and then, we need to ease up a bit… slow down, and catch up on lost time… only then, can we charge ahead AGAIN! 🙂
    Well written is 3 lines, Leo!! Awesome..

    • yeah.. slow, rest, reenergize anad then.. CHARGE!! 😉 hehe, glad u liked the haiku, Kavi 🙂

31. Delightful!

    • thank u very much, Rohini 🙂

32. Beautifully written, Leo!

    • thanks Wow 🙂

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