Can we truly hide?
From the eyes which
Know us so close
From the hearts that
Hold us dear to each
Beat; or from the
Thoughts which give
Solace and comfort
To us during times
When we need most
For our faces may
Show just a façade
Yet dear eyes which
Search deeper will
Understand; the
Soul is still visible
Through the eyes
Where emotions do
Reside; however we
Try, they can’t lie
Eyes never a façade
For Poetry Potluck Monday
Image: Mask by artist DreamSand, DeviantArt
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
Never indeed! Those masks don’t cover much at all…
Besides, I have an obsession with eyes anyway! 🙂
Nicely done, Leo!! Right by the theme!! Thanks for playing…. 🙂
thanks Kavi 🙂 yeah, not much at all.. and even I’ve an obsession with eyes as will 😉 😀
glad to be playing along with the potluck 🙂
no, we can not hide,
no matter what you decide.
what a thought provoking poem…
🙂
Thanks for sharing!
thanks for the read, Ji 🙂 glad u liked it..! why don’t u put a gravatar? I can know its u then, unique it’ll be right?
The party will not be full of enthusiasm without your participation….
unbeatable job!
Cheers!
Happy Monday!
xxx
hehe.. glad to have ur enthusiastic comments here, Ji 🙂 unbeatable job there too 😉
nice verse leo…no the eyes tend to give us away to those who look and know to notice…
yeah, so true Brian.. it depends on who looks and if they know how to 🙂
OMG…ditto on that one, I have an obsession too…(you just have to look at my webpage hahahaha) Loved that you kept to the theme…awesomeness!!! Hugs xxx
hehe 😀 thanks Amanda 🙂 yeah.. obsession with the eyes.. good obsession though 😛
nice theme.. awesomeness there too..
This poem is great.
Nice picture too
thank u, Art Web Show 🙂
Love this. Eyes, they tell so much.
thanks very much, Thoughts Not Lost, glad u like it 🙂
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thanks a lot, Thoughts Not Lost 🙂
Eyes can tell you so many things than a mouth can tells 😛
yep.. so true Riika, indeed the eyes speak more than the mouth sometimes 🙂
Lovely Rhymme Leo.. Great thoughts…
–Someone Is Special–
thanks SiS 🙂
Eyes speak so much! One can see sorrow, happiness, gladness, inspiration or pain within them!
It is our soul’s window so they say… a facade? Yes! One can’t hide his inner joys and pains, coz it always show in the eyes! I wonder why? 🙁
Beautiful as always Leo… 🙂
yeah. so true.. glad u liked it Amity..
How true… Eyes never lie and they speak even when we don’t want them to. lovely poetry 🙂
thanks Sweta 🙂 glad u like it.. and yes.. they do speak when we dont want them to too 🙂
As Usual, Beautiful Fantastic Fabulous Write Up. I Agree To Amity Words 🙂 🙂
thanks a lot, Minnie 🙂 glad u liked it..
Lovely !!! Eyes , they tell so much , yet at some corner of it , there are lot of things hidden inside those lids too !!
yep. lots of hidden stuff in the eyes for sure, ADG 🙂
Lovely and wise poem. The eyes can’t lie.
yeah, so true, Talon 🙂