Brilliant Bob, he got a vital clue,
Finally, he cried, the breakthrough
So many choices, he still had,
But that’s not all he missed, the lad
As he ran on streets of Timbuctoo
Spilt right fluids, he said with pride,
“That’s not all, friend”, I replied,
He understood as he looked below,
Went as red as ripened tomato,
Scooted back home, as laughter died
For One Single Impression – #132 – Choices
For Writer’s Island – #19 – Breakthrough
For Lots of Laughter – #3 – Spill
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
poor Bob!
ode to shoes
:D, for sure, Gautami 🙂
Poor Bob. Don’t u make fun of him.
hehe.. okie Harshadji 😉
That’s quite a breakthrough 🙂
yeah, isn’t it just 😉 😀 glad u liked it, Anthony!
got 3 in one post,
mmm..
u r so very creative!
thanks, Jingle 🙂 glad u liked the creativity 😉
I can always do with a nice LOL!! And here was a gooood one!! 😀
even me can use those LOLs, Rumz.. 😉 😀 but I tend to go serious 😛 glad u liked the LOL 😀
I find it really hard to do limericks….Love the way you’ve been swizzling it out back to back….with those needed LOL’s too!! 🙂
yeah… Lots of Limericks 😉 glad u liked it and could LOL on it, Nanka 😀
Let’s hope he secured his invention, better than his person.
Elizabeth
yeah.. lets hope so, Elizabeth 😉
That’s lovely.. indeed creative.. but then that’s Leo.. a versatile thinker..and thoughts just spill..turn in to poems, beautiful poems..
thank you very much, Rji 🙂 glad u liked it..
Great fun. Bravo.
thank u very much, Vivienne 🙂
you even managed to combine three prompts in a nice way – but i have to admit – i felt a bit sad for bob….
mine is up as well
yeah.. a bit sad, but a bit fun too 😀 glad u liked it, Claudia..
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😉 😀 eh Nimue?
Bob must live and learn! Well done.
thank you very much, Sandy 🙂 yeah, he’ll live n learn, hopefully 😉
lol good one but poor bob
yeah.. poor him 🙂 thx Marja!
Fun reading! =3 Bob will make it all out i guess:P
he should make it back home first, Riika 😉 😛
Poor Bob- that was good- very creatively done!
yeah.. poor fella.. hope he has his wits about him next time, eh Patti? 😉
This is a fun and creative post. Your poem embodies all of the prompts very nicely.
thank u, Write Girl 🙂 glad u felt I did justice to all three prompts…
ah….. you have painted a wonderful poem to a very common response to these situations in life. Funny how we don’t take them more as ‘things happen’. People are such teasers and it can be so hard on some personalities! Well done.
yeah.. sometimes, such situations, we forget where and how we are 😉 glad u liked it, Tammie 😀
LOL! It’s always good to see someone have fun with a prompt.
its always nice to see someone having the fun reading it too, Tilly 😀 glad u liked it 😉
Our choices do have consequences.
Best wishers, Leo.
yes, yes they do, Carlos 😀 glad u liked it..!
Whoa is Bob…whoa.
thanks, Woih 🙂
I guess our Bob made the wrong choice. 🙂
Fun poem, Leo.
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looks like he did, Jim 😉 hehe.. glad u had fun..!