For Magpie Tales – #30
For Haiku My Heart
Image of the apple given by Willow of Willow Manor, hostess of Magpie Tales!
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
Worries do bite into your head to disturb the peace in there…
Nicely said!! 🙂
And a new style of presentation…
for haikus, yeah.. first time I’m using words in the image itself 🙂 glad u liked it.. Rumz 😀
Worrying thoughts do trouble the mind a lot.
Well thought over words!!
yeah.. 🙂 they do trouble the mind a lot 😀 glad u liked it, Nanka!
I was there yesterday but today I am jumping outside of my mind and working on the important stuff.
good to hear it, Kristen 🙂
nice bite into tranquility….bkm
thanks, Mackie 🙂 glad u liked it..
Short and brief but full of thought with deeper meaning.
Elizabeth
thank u very much, Elizabeth.. glad u liked it and the deeper meaning too..! 🙂
That last line is great. Wonderful Haiku the apple made for a fine prompt!
thank u very much, Amanda.. yeah, Willow gives interesting pictures.. makes one bite into thoughts to find a relation.. 😀
Just 3 lines, 17 syllables but how much you have conveyed.. Great
–Someone Is Special–
thanks, Saravana..
So we are back to Eden and ‘knowledge of good and evil”. Three sparse lines of crowded conflict! Unusual and brilliant!
thanks very much, Stafford 😀 glad u liked the three lines!
Yes, the mind is a battleground. And the apple is an apt illustration for your words…
thank u very much, Leslie 🙂 yeah, the mind is indeed a battleground..
love this.
troubling thoughts…
with an apple that holds great appeal.
thanks for being here…
thank u very much, Rebecca 🙂 glad u came here too..
wonderful…!!!
not many words let with me to praise your work..!!! its nicely written..!!!
thanks, Ms.Meduri.. glad u liked it 🙂
Lovely Leo.. Mind is ever ready for the battles.. only if begins to listen to the heart.. haven’t visited my page of late Leo..missed your wisdom there…
ah R’ji, mind is always ready, but the battle is only beginning… gld u liked it 🙂
have been worklogged of late.. not bloghopped much.
Oooohhh.. what a take on this one!!
Tension… building…
Cleverly done, L!!!
thanks, K 😀 glad u liked it..!
How ironic. Wasn’t the bite of the apple the start of all the worries in the first place? At least some stories tell us this is so. It may be for all I know.
Peace.
well, I’ve no idea of that Spadoman 😀 I’m hearing it now anyways 😀 glad u liked it..!
Are you listening to my soul?
me? don’t think so Ms.Moon 😀
Your haiku is perfect….
thank you very much, Helen 🙂
Very creative. Lovely.
All the best, Boonie
thank u very much, Boonie.
This is lovely . .different! i like it!
thanks, Riette 🙂
Oh no! So true, such a good reason to cultivate peace.
so true, Meri 🙂
Great haiku and picture, Leo….mind battles are some of the hardest ones, aren’t they?
very much so, Delphyne.. biggest n hardest..!
Oh no, not the mind battles!! (I know them so well)
me too, Willow. I know it too!
so true… this battles of mind are a the worse kind of battle.. 🙁
ya ya, agreed. worst kind for sure, Megz 🙂
Love the take on the photo prompt… and such a true haiku…
thank u very much, Dianne 😀 glad u liked it..!
so true… when the mind takes control, troubles are in for the party too!!
Great take!!
🙂
so true, Gabriela.. troubles form part of every party..! 😀 glad u liked the take…!
ah…so get rid of your worries and enjoy the apple…easier said than done i know..nice magpie!
yeah, it’d be very nice, wouldn’t it Brian? and easier said than done for sure..!
what a perfect and beautiful metaphor!
thanks, Kathy 🙂 glad u liked it..!
Very clever, inventive, take on the prompt.
thanks, Berowne 🙂
worries indeed bite tranquility…so true
here’s my magpie
thanks, Claudia 🙂 glad u liked it.. will drop by soon 🙂
well put! I like this a lot!
thanks very much, Kathe 🙂
So well said Leo, and so true… worries so eat you up… Loved your presentation form..
thanks, Abhilasha 🙂 glad u liked it, both haiku & presentation..!