Composed in stillness
What secrets do they carry?
These vast silent sands
For Sensational Haiku Wednesday
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Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing to me are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
I loved your secret..
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thanks, Saravana.
u make me wonder…
stunning Haiku!
🙂
ah.. that was the needed effect, Ji 😀 glad u liked it..!
This is lovely, I love the desert and I actually read your Haiku aloud just to hear how it sounded while I was looking at that picture. just wonderful. You could have kept writing I would have avidly read!
hi Amanda, glad u loved the haiku.. and yeah, I could have gone on, but then, it wouldn’t be a haiku 😀
awesome ^_^
thanks Chocz 🙂
The first line in this is just awesome. I wonder if during the composition it was this still? Excellent haiku my friend. Have a great Wednesday. Rabbit, rabbit
thanks Thom.. I believe the desert is not wavering, or that even if it wavers, it returns to the same position again 🙂 so it is always still. glad u liked the haiku 😀 have an excellent Wednesday too!
Great Haiku!! Can feel the stillness and calm in the words as much as in the picture.
thanks, Nanka 🙂 yeah..glad u could feel the calmness.. ! 😀
Lovely Haiku!!
Terrific solitude and stillness.
The sands hold many secrets… 🙂
thanks, Rumz 🙂 yeah, they do hold a lot of secrets 🙂
they carry the eternal silence that have the strongest strength..!!!
nice write up leo..!!
thanks, Ms.Meduri.. yeah, perhaps so 🙂
I’m sure many a buried secret could be found. Nice haiku!
yeah.. I think so too, Polly 🙂
Woww.. profound ones, I am sure…
Tales from the past, lovers’ rendezvous…and who knows what not!
A very nice haiku complemented by a lovely picture!
thanks Kavi 🙂 glad u loved the haiku.. yeah.. the sands hold lot of secrets 😀
Yes, what secrets do they hold..! Beautiful Haiku Leo..
thanks, Rameshji 😀 glad u like it.
Very nice, Leo – makes you think 😉 Well done!
thank u very much, Jenn 🙂 glad u liked it 🙂
aaaaahhh.. lovely 🙂
brilliant lines 🙂
and a perfect pic to go with it 😀
thanks, Megz 🙂