Mind struggles
Yields to temptation
Survival difficult
For Haiku Heights
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
Those three lines do say a lot…
Well said and Nice Haiku!! 🙂
sometimes, less is more, as is the case with haiku I feel 🙂
thanks Rumz..!
Deep and profound thoughts in this Haiku…
The tussle in the mind, well depicted!!
thank u Nanka 🙂 glad u liked it..!
Absolutely! Survival is indeed difficult.Very well said Leo 🙂
yeah.. very difficult indeed Jaspreet! 🙂
So true Leo, to struggle my temptation is soo difficult!
Very good write!
thanks very much, Amity 🙂 glad u liked it..!
Temptation often generates the ultimate struggle to stand firm! When it comes to chocolate however, I usually don’t bother struggling at all!
neither do I, when it comes to chocolates 😀
thanks Gemma 😉
Lovely poem
thanks very much, Jeeves 🙂
Temptation? Oh, keep it as far away from me as possible! 🙂
My Haiku Heights
ah, I wish keeping it away were that easy, MMT 😀
Wow! very nice! 🙂
thanks Tharangni 🙂
Great Great Great Great…
Lovely Haiku
–Someone Is Special–
thanks Saravana 🙂
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two awards on the bottom for you,
the most creative blogger award,
u r a rare friend award….
cheers!
thanks very much, Jingle 🙂 the two awards hv been accepted and will be in my appreciation from friends slides soon..
cheers!
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added u,
now you can have all five awards in my post…
🙂
many thanks, Jingle 🙂 will add them up real soon.. after my 18 is completed i think..! 😀
You said it how it is.
thanks Stan 🙂
Speaking through my soul. I always believe the strongest writings are the ones with the least amount of words.
thanks very much, Splash of Expression 🙂 glad u liked it.. i second ur belief..!
Temptation can sometimes be the ultimate obstacle. I enjoyed the haiku for this week Leo. Take care.
thanks a lot.. glad u liked the haiku Write Girl 🙂