The Beginning

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I lay so barren
No one to care
For my soul
An empty mind
With no life
A virgin beauty
Giving birth to
Unseen hearts
I wait for love
From the hands
I hold lovingly
From those lips
Nourished daily
By my bosom
Endless a wait
For those hands
Rip my modesty
Stab my babies
Bare my heart
Without regret
Not an ear listens
To my silent plea
They continue
To ravish my soul
As each day ends
Melancholy holds
Heart in chains
Intuition senses
A return to past
Beginning beckons
As the final end

Written for One Single Impression
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Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.

34 thoughts on “The Beginning”

  1. Beautiful description of Mother Earth’s plight…
    Sad to see the ‘Virgin Beauty’ of Mother Earth ravished by mindless people…
    If conservation is not taken seriously…the end is surely just around the corner…
    Great Poem!! 😀 Thought Provoking and action to be taken immediately!!

  2. Mother Earth’s Pain Is Very Well Described. Inspite of stressing on the point of Conservation, there are Zer0’s Eyes, or very few ppl to dedicate to lend their hands for conservation. Excellent beautiful Write up Leo 🙂 🙂 Fantastic Fabulous Write Up!!!!!!!!!!!

    This Poem Also Says, How The Society Is Dealing With The Phrase conservation ????? Tomorrow is Independence Day & Lets All Join For The Slogan, Protect Mother Earth, & Lend complete Support To Preserve Conservation.

    Mother Earth Should be Freed From All Her Pains & Sufferings 🙂 🙂

    Very Happy To Read Such A Marvelous Post Leo 🙂 🙂 Leo, You Rock!!!!!!!!!!

  3. Nature’s unending plea to save her modesty which is being exploited by unscrupulous people is beautifully portrayed in this poem and a befitting picture too…
    The picture itself tells her endless woes… 🙂

  4. Wonderfully expressed! The pain of Mother Earth has been conveyed through perfect choice of words.The poem is very beautiful.
    As you know, I am not much of a nature lover but this post of yours has seriously got me thinking 😉 Very well done Leo!! 🙂

    • u live in nature, so one has to love it too I think, but not all do, do they Jaspreet? 🙂 her pain can’t be conveyed by any poet that easily.. I just tried 🙂

  5. A wonderfully told story of a hard life. Then back to the beginning at the very end. 🙂 What a waste but for the last few breathes.
    ..

    • Mother Earth does have a hard life Jim.. 🙂 she bears us all and some of us in greed and without any conscience tears her apart..! waste indeed…

  6. And thank you for the nice prompt. It was a fun job. I only wish I had more time to try writing something niceer. 🙂
    ..

    • it wasn’t my suggestion, Jim.. was given by Just Some Words, who is my sister.

      on her absence from blogging, I just gave her poem thats all 🙂

  7. This is a sad tale of mother’s earth existence…I dunno if we can have a second chance of having a new mother earth…

    You’ve served it well Leo…:) Kudos!!!

    • thank you, Gautami 🙂 glad u liked it, and perhaps.. a lot of us feel that will be the way it’ll end.. with an end going back to the beginning..

      regards the shift, it was kind of forced on.. if I was still at Blogspot, I’d definitely have used the Disqus I think..! but for now.. WordPress is where I’m at 😀

  16. This is truly someone we may want to take note…and the Earth is changing already if you do realize, and there is always campaign of saving the Earth and tress, but I seldom see them doing that nowadays already :<

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