Wind caresses
Lips field the tears
Daffodil dances
Haiku Heights #3 – Field
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
Wow…am first!Lovely Naisaku this is Leo! Lovely nature…and the pic is so befitting of every penned words here!Good morning!Btw, where is your connoisseur? It's my prompt…:)
Amity, its a HAIKU not a NaiSaiKu 😛 glad u liked it…Connoisseur is over at ImPromptu… good morning to u!
Love the concept of lips fielding tears! A very Nature orientated haiku symbolising a very sensitive human condition!
wewww…i always commit mistakes…:Pthanks, now going to your connoisseur…:)
yeesh! 😛
hi Gemma, thank u for the wonderful prompt 🙂 it was a pleasure to use it.! glad u liked my haiku as well..!
beautiful
thanks Magiceye! 🙂
Short maybe but beatifully expressed all the same. Leo.Yvonne.
Can sense the lonely Daffodil tossing its head, dropping tears of dew and dancing gently in the breeze. A pretty picture you have painted here in very few words…Good work!! 🙂
thanks Yvonne.. 🙂
thank you Rumz 🙂 glad u liked it..! yours was lovely too!
Great capture of springtime.
thanks Stan 🙂
Hey Leo,
these three lines are absolutely beautiful..
I see a Senryu in a Haiku..Lovely!!!
thank you Vibz 🙂 glad u liked it and could see the senryu in the haiku too 😀
Leo, first thanks to you and Amity for having invited me to Haiku Heights.. appears interesting.. I have made my entry.. have a look.. and about you..ah! your haikus take one to another world.. very thoughtful always.. will be following haiku Heights..
hi Rameshji 🙂 welcome to HH, from here itself 😀 welcome for the welcome too 😉
its a new venture.. do join in whenever u can.. heading off to see ur haiku..!