Half way through
I know I’m slow
The goal is near
Yet so long to go
Half way through
I want some rest
Can’t stop now
I move with zest
Half way through
Just half left now
Must fight battles
Make it somehow
Half way through
I continue to run
To reach the end
As the first one
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing to me are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
A most admirable effort there. You made it :-)Nice one.
Very nice – amazing how far half way can feel.
thanks Alice..! yeah, how far half way can feel indeed! 🙁 😀
haha 😉 i made it halfway indeed 😀 glad u liked it Anthony!
It feels like a case of 'so near, yet so far…' but finally perseverance will take that one last step to victory….Loved the flow of the poem…Excellent effort!! 🙂
thanks Rumz, perseverance will win.. surely :Ddidnt take much of effort though, i dint know SS came out till u told me 😉 😀
I don't know why I had such a devil of a time finding the comment box. I know that feling of being halfway through a race and realizing you still have just as far to go. I wish I knew what it is like to cross the finish line first. But then there's some races you don't want to win. 🙂
hi Nara.. guess, it’ll be easier now to find the comments..!
the second half of a race seems more distant doesn’t it?
I felt winded about half-way through. 🙂 Very nice!
haha 😀 thank u very much BJ 🙂
it is really sad that it got corrupted 🙁
hope we can have it all back together again here!
all posts n comments are there here! thankfully! 🙂
trying to settle in..!
Leo
This is very nice..
Yours Frendly,
Saravana Kumar M
thanks Saravana
and regards the link u gave me
thank u dude
i’m just settling in here
i’ve all my comments and posts too..
🙂
not going to be inactive!
Good one..and welcome to WP! commenting will be easier for me 🙂
hmm.. thanks Ava 🙂
itss beautiful ^_________^
loved the new space! :)))))
thanks Choco! 🙂 glad u liked it..!
Beautiful, positive words..really uplifting and shows a spirit to fight! Thanks for your visit..Jae 🙂
hi Jae, many thanks for the lovely comment..
was a pleasure visiting yours! 🙂
loved this one ! simple and inspiring still 🙂
Thank you Nimue 🙂
Amazing and wonderful poem^^~ 😀 the ending will definitely be a great one!
hi Riika 😀 thank u very much for that comment! hope so too.!
wow that was so well written and so positive.
loved it!
thank you very much Harini..! 🙂
It is amazing how positive it is to reach half way with the worst(?) behind. You may rhyme without reason but your readers are still touched by your words.
hi Old Egg.. yeah, maybe the worst is behind.. but its amazing to move onward with no inkling of what lies in store for us too..
Glad for your words 🙂
as always you have me spell bound – not half but totally
are we there yet?
thanks Divaa D 🙂