New Camaraderie

Writing poetry is always challenging for me, and in that challenge also, I find some fun. I chisel some forms, taking randomness as my companion. ABC Wednesday turns to the letter C today, and I choose to do a mirrored Nonnet form. C is for Camaraderie:


Darkness sees its shadow in moonlight
Blanket of stars covers our fear
Unfathomable meanings
Desperately I seek
Road to reveries
Fake crevices
Try to take
Despair
Mine
Night
Calmness
New silence
Rain of false care
Somehow it succeeds
Fear revealed, it escapes
Under this cascade of stars
Camaraderie takes shape soon
Hope covers mind, relieves its burden

Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.

  

108 thoughts on “New Camaraderie

  1. Aren't you "The Perfect Poet" ? :)If you go on like this, one day you will be as known as Alfred Lord Tennyson and William Wordsworth. :DTry and write a book, seriously!

  2. @Sam,thank u very much.. glad u liked it ๐Ÿ™‚ the structure intrigues me too, though its just my 2nd Mirrored Nonnet!

  3. I very much enjoyed reading your poem – I'd never heard of "nonette" before. And the photo goes perfectly with it. Thanks too for visiting and commenting on my "c" post!

  4. A beautiful form Leo…see you're really…hmmm…never mind, not Mr. Congeniality this time coz u said (;P) when I told you so…:)))But this time let me say, You are Mr. C…for very good Camaraderie you have with so many bloggers around the world…:):PGood morning…:)

  5. Wonderful.Beautiful Poem..Written by Leo…Inspires me a lot….Never know what to comment…..But still commenting specially for Leo……Great thoughts expressed in few words……Love to visit this page…..Never tried reading Leo….The Awesome Poet…Lovable Frend..Leo.This is a small try to make my comment lovely as I feel the same reading your poems..If you wish to save a heart, then stop by Save a Heart!Yours Frendly,Saravana Kumar M

  6. WOW..THAT POST TOOK ME,FIRST THE SHAPE IS VERY CLEVER..A BEAUTY TO THE EYE,the verses are too perfect,the colors of the blog are my kind of style,i so enjoyed being around..made me feel HOME..clapping my hands Leo,loving it and will certainly come back for more pleasure..:)

  7. @Amy,Lol. ๐Ÿ™‚ Nonnet. no E in it ๐Ÿ˜€ glad u enjoyed reading my poem.. was a pleasure stopping by yours too..!

  8. @Amity,keep those nutty nicknames to yourself ๐Ÿ˜› I'm Leo.. that is the best.. nothin else needed. glad u liked it..! thank u very much! ๐Ÿ™‚

  9. @Saravana,what form was that dude? ๐Ÿ™‚ thank u so very much.. glad u liked it..! my pen name is The Amateur Poet da.. not awesome! ๐Ÿ˜€ do note it ๐Ÿ˜‰

  10. @Desert Rose,thank u for that wonderful comment.. ๐Ÿ™‚ glad u liked the verse and my blog.. ur welcome to come back for more reads any time.. thanks for the applause too ๐Ÿ™‚ * gives a bow *

  11. WOW! there is so much i like about this, the form is outstanding, it makes you want to think about the message you've given us.standing ovation!warm smiles,

  12. @ LeoSorry for commenting with two errors.Wonderful.Beautiful Poem..Written by Leo…Inspires me a lot….Never know what to comment…..But still commenting specially for Leo……Great thoughts expressed in few words……Love to visit this page…..Never tired reading Leo….The Amateur Poet…Lovable Frend..Leo.Just a try to the reverse style of what you wrote, never know what form is this, but simply wrote these. it increases by word count from 1 to 6 and again decreases from 6 to1. if you wanna name it, do name it..Tomo there is a Haiku for you written by me, don't mind if there are some mistakes.Do read my save a heart initiative, The Untold Story and vote for me if it is worth so, do drop a comment so that I would know what LEO feels about it…Thursday Tales 18, usually you will be first one to visit my write up but this time you have become busy I hope. Do visit and let me know what you feel.Yours Frendly,Saravana Kumar M

  13. @Saravana,thank u dude.. for that new form of poem.. i don't name my experimental writes either, so lets leave it nameless itself :Dbeen a bit busy, yes.. will come round to the Tales soon..Haiku for me? ๐Ÿ˜ฎ ok. will check out too..

  14. Hi Leo..i was impressed.so I have followed you…i loved the poem and the hour glass shape..really well crafted and flowed wonderfully..thanks for sharing with One Shot..cheers Pete

  15. Hi Leo,I hope you get published, if you are not already. You do have a way with words. Brenda Bryant (Rinkly Rimes) and Carmen Henesey have published their poems and even have Amazon widgets on their blogs.My very best wishes,Anna(not my real name either)Anna's Cats

  16. The power of hope indeed! When running from fears and all darknesses, hope is that rope one needs to hold on to, and climb back into a world of possibilities! A lovely poem! The picture is lovely… And the visual was really a treat to the eyes… heheh… I too had quite recently written a poem that "looked" like a vase… So it's very nice to see a poem that has shape (well, literally and figuratively) :)Keep up the awesomeness!

  17. The moon beckons me againto a poet who searchesdeep withindiscover and probethe truthsbeneath her glowthanks Leo for the quest under the moonso glad you could shine some light the direction of One Shotsmiles from the Moon

  18. I enjoyed reading that. I no nothing of poetry, but think it must have taken time and thought to come up with words that would create that shape. Impressive!

  19. @Anna,thank u ๐Ÿ™‚ i hope to get published too.. and i will some time soon ๐Ÿ˜€ glad u liked it and stopped by!

  20. @Kavisionz,thank u for loving both picture and shape.. as well as the verse itself.. a vase u say? i should try that sometime ๐Ÿ˜€ i like shapes…! will keep up the poetry ๐Ÿ™‚

  21. Well Me-Era said it in short , what we all keep saying ! :)This form of poem is really a treat to eyes , and your words , a treat to lips , which bends them into a smile ! Wonderful poem ! ๐Ÿ™‚

  22. thank u Jabblog ๐Ÿ™‚ etheree? is that another form? ๐Ÿ™‚ i'll check it out & try too.. glad u liked it! ๐Ÿ™‚

  23. Completely in love with this da Vinu… ๐Ÿ™‚ I mean… I gotta learn this soon and try this! Awesome! ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€

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