Writing poetry is always challenging for me, and in that challenge also, I find some fun. I chisel some forms, taking randomness as my companion. ABC Wednesday turns to the letter C today, and I choose to do a mirrored Nonnet form. C is for Camaraderie:
Darkness sees its shadow in moonlight
Blanket of stars covers our fear
Unfathomable meanings
Desperately I seek
Road to reveries
Fake crevices
Try to take
Despair
Mine
Night
Calmness
New silence
Rain of false care
Somehow it succeeds
Fear revealed, it escapes
Under this cascade of stars
Camaraderie takes shape soon
Hope covers mind, relieves its burden
For ABC Wednesday Round 7 – C for Camaraderie with image from This Source.
Also submitted to One Shot Wednesday @ One Stop Poetry
Also submitted to One Shot Wednesday @ One Stop Poetry
Also given to Indiblogger Indivine
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
Aren't you "The Perfect Poet" ? :)If you go on like this, one day you will be as known as Alfred Lord Tennyson and William Wordsworth. :DTry and write a book, seriously!
You are indeed an incredible poet! I love your words and your style! Hope your week is going well!Sylvia
Wonderful, wonderful poem, Leo. The structure is marvellous, and the message woven into your words is deeply felt.
Stunning shot and poetry, very beautiful!!ABC Wednesday: C
Wonderful poem, beautiful words.
Love the hourglass structure as much as the poem itself!ROG, ABC Wednesday team
I learned a new type of poetry today. I loved this and the theme. Well done Leo.
Fantastic Write Up Vinay 🙂 🙂
A beautiful poem and unique structure. Your words are very mindful of our need for friends.
How Clever and Creative you are today. Great C post.
@Meera,no.. The Amateur Poet da 🙂 will consider the book someday! 😀
@Sylvia,thank u 🙂 glad u liked the words n style. week so far so good 😀
@Sam,thank u very much.. glad u liked it 🙂 the structure intrigues me too, though its just my 2nd Mirrored Nonnet!
@Mar,thank u.. the shot was from that source 🙂 glad u liked my poetry..!
@Rajesh,thank u 🙂
@Roger,i do like it too 🙂 glad.. :Dthank u for stopping by!
@Photo Wannabe,thank u very much.. glad u liked the form & the theme! 🙂
@Creativity,thank u ARS! 🙂
@H&C,thank u.. the structure is what i like the most! 😀 and yes, we all need friends! 🙂
@Ann,thank u 🙂 glad u liked my creativity today..!
I love the photograph and poem. Both very powerful.
Such a stunning photo and then a such a lovely poem! Thanks for sharing both!
Clever poem! Thanks for sharing. And also for your visit.Have a great Wednesday.
Excellent, and great last line.
The mirror effect is so interesting. It really enhances the words. Lovely poem. Thanks for stopping by my place.
I very much enjoyed reading your poem – I'd never heard of "nonette" before. And the photo goes perfectly with it. Thanks too for visiting and commenting on my "c" post!
I love the sheer shape of your work, Leo. Tis a joy to behold.
A beautiful form Leo…see you're really…hmmm…never mind, not Mr. Congeniality this time coz u said (;P) when I told you so…:)))But this time let me say, You are Mr. C…for very good Camaraderie you have with so many bloggers around the world…:):PGood morning…:)
The photo and those words…Both hauntingly beautiful.
Wonderful.Beautiful Poem..Written by Leo…Inspires me a lot….Never know what to comment…..But still commenting specially for Leo……Great thoughts expressed in few words……Love to visit this page…..Never tried reading Leo….The Awesome Poet…Lovable Frend..Leo.This is a small try to make my comment lovely as I feel the same reading your poems..If you wish to save a heart, then stop by Save a Heart!Yours Frendly,Saravana Kumar M
I really like the flow of this. Very enjoyable read. So eloquent.
nice form. love shaped poems…esp if you can tie it into what you are saying…nice msg as well…thanks for linking up to oneshot!
I love the softness, the flowing of the words. Beautiful.
Wow, a stunning photo and a beautiful poem, who could ask for more?Annelie E, ABC Wednesday Team
Creative and clever for sure! Great style…
"road to reveries" – that resonates.Loved the poem and the style in which it was created.
soo cool form !!! thanks for telling about it 🙂 and the poem .. well it was perfect beyond words 🙂
i cant blink now – i m so awed!
wow, you brought me to another place.. wonderful…
wow.. how do you manage to write.. you have written it in that shape? You are SERIOUSLY talented leo!! 🙂
WOW..THAT POST TOOK ME,FIRST THE SHAPE IS VERY CLEVER..A BEAUTY TO THE EYE,the verses are too perfect,the colors of the blog are my kind of style,i so enjoyed being around..made me feel HOME..clapping my hands Leo,loving it and will certainly come back for more pleasure..:)
The words enhance the mirrored nonnet. Loved its puuurrfect structure and the image complements it too.Loved it!! 🙂
The perfectly mirrored nonnet is a pleasure to look at and read too.What a perfect job!!Well done!!
you shape your poem like camaraderie under cascades of stars – beautiful
Fantastic poem in every aspect. Love that last line too. cheers
@Carver,thank u.. glad u liked them both! 😀
@Beverly,thanks very much for stopping by! 🙂 glad u liked it..!
@Wil,thank u.. for liking my post and for the visit as well! 🙂
@Anthony,thank u. glad u liked it! 🙂
@Peripheral Perceptions,thanks.. its been a while since I tried this form! 🙂 glad it worked..!
@Amy,Lol. 🙂 Nonnet. no E in it 😀 glad u enjoyed reading my poem.. was a pleasure stopping by yours too..!
@Julie,thank u so very much! 😀
@Amity,keep those nutty nicknames to yourself 😛 I'm Leo.. that is the best.. nothin else needed. glad u liked it..! thank u very much! 🙂
@Cheryl,words are mine, photo belongs to some1 else, though it suits my words to an inch! 😀 glad u liked em!
@Saravana,what form was that dude? 🙂 thank u so very much.. glad u liked it..! my pen name is The Amateur Poet da.. not awesome! 😀 do note it 😉
@CM,many thanks.. 🙂 glad u liked..!
@Brian,thank u.. its a pleasure to link it there.. glad u liked it! 🙂
@Glynn,thanks very much.. 🙂
@Annelie,thank u very much! 🙂 glad u liked it! 😀
@Tumble words,thank u 🙂
@Talon,thanks.. glad u liked both style & words..!
@Lady,thanks! welcome for the sharing.. and glad u found the poem good..!
@Desi,why? 😮 eyes got dusty? :(take care Desi..glad u liked my poem..!
@Vernz,thank u.. glad u liked it! 🙂
@Ava,thanks dear. the form begets that shape actually 😀 so i wrote it in it.. 🙂 glad u loved it..!
@Desert Rose,thank u for that wonderful comment.. 🙂 glad u liked the verse and my blog.. ur welcome to come back for more reads any time.. thanks for the applause too 🙂 * gives a bow *
@Nanka,thank u.. glad u liked it! 🙂
@Rumya,thanks very much.. 🙂 twas a pleaure to share the form with all..! glad u loved it..!
@Claudia,thanks! 🙂 i never thought of it that way.. glad u liked..!
@Dustus,thank u.. glad u liked it! 🙂
WOW! there is so much i like about this, the form is outstanding, it makes you want to think about the message you've given us.standing ovation!warm smiles,
@ LeoSorry for commenting with two errors.Wonderful.Beautiful Poem..Written by Leo…Inspires me a lot….Never know what to comment…..But still commenting specially for Leo……Great thoughts expressed in few words……Love to visit this page…..Never tired reading Leo….The Amateur Poet…Lovable Frend..Leo.Just a try to the reverse style of what you wrote, never know what form is this, but simply wrote these. it increases by word count from 1 to 6 and again decreases from 6 to1. if you wanna name it, do name it..Tomo there is a Haiku for you written by me, don't mind if there are some mistakes.Do read my save a heart initiative, The Untold Story and vote for me if it is worth so, do drop a comment so that I would know what LEO feels about it…Thursday Tales 18, usually you will be first one to visit my write up but this time you have become busy I hope. Do visit and let me know what you feel.Yours Frendly,Saravana Kumar M
fantastic my friend….thats why me and many more admire you… hats off
@ deepakWell said, that's why everyone admires Leo, the best………………………Yours Frendly,Saravana Kumar M
@Jessie,thank u for the standing ovation! 🙂 glad u liked the verse & its form too..
@Saravana,thank u dude.. for that new form of poem.. i don't name my experimental writes either, so lets leave it nameless itself :Dbeen a bit busy, yes.. will come round to the Tales soon..Haiku for me? 😮 ok. will check out too..
@Deepak,thank u.. for ur praise & admiration.. 🙂
@Saravana,nah.. just an amateur.. more better & best out there 😀
Hi Leo..i was impressed.so I have followed you…i loved the poem and the hour glass shape..really well crafted and flowed wonderfully..thanks for sharing with One Shot..cheers Pete
May I say I loved this piece? And also I loved the visual of it's arrangement.
Hi Leo,I hope you get published, if you are not already. You do have a way with words. Brenda Bryant (Rinkly Rimes) and Carmen Henesey have published their poems and even have Amazon widgets on their blogs.My very best wishes,Anna(not my real name either)Anna's Cats
The power of hope indeed! When running from fears and all darknesses, hope is that rope one needs to hold on to, and climb back into a world of possibilities! A lovely poem! The picture is lovely… And the visual was really a treat to the eyes… heheh… I too had quite recently written a poem that "looked" like a vase… So it's very nice to see a poem that has shape (well, literally and figuratively) :)Keep up the awesomeness!
Interesting form you've written this one in – the hourglass. As the top empties, the bottom fills. Appropriate!
The moon beckons me againto a poet who searchesdeep withindiscover and probethe truthsbeneath her glowthanks Leo for the quest under the moonso glad you could shine some light the direction of One Shotsmiles from the Moon
I enjoyed reading that. I no nothing of poetry, but think it must have taken time and thought to come up with words that would create that shape. Impressive!
Very cool shape– Eric Satie is smiling!http://mairmusic.wordpress.com/
@Pete,welcome.. and thank u for loving my verse and the follow as well.. glad to share my work with OSW. 🙂
@Annell,thank u for loving both verse and shape! 🙂
@Anna,thank u 🙂 i hope to get published too.. and i will some time soon 😀 glad u liked it and stopped by!
@Kavisionz,thank u for loving both picture and shape.. as well as the verse itself.. a vase u say? i should try that sometime 😀 i like shapes…! will keep up the poetry 🙂
@Jay,thank u.. exactly what i was trying to do 🙂
@Moondustwriter,thank u for stopping by.. glad the moon guided you here.. and One Shot too :Ddo come again..!
@Gayle,thought, yes.. time not much.. i'm more of a spontaneous writer.. 🙂 glad u liked it! 😀
@Mair,thank u 🙂 glad u liked it!
wow I love the picture and the poem. The visual aspect of the poem is just wonderful.Thank you for this great post.
@Dani,thank u very much, glad u liked it..! 🙂
Well Me-Era said it in short , what we all keep saying ! :)This form of poem is really a treat to eyes , and your words , a treat to lips , which bends them into a smile ! Wonderful poem ! 🙂
@ADG,thank u 🙂 glad u liked it.. both shape and verse..!
Wow, I'm impressed. This is so lovely, both poetically and visually.
thanks very much Patti 🙂 glad u liked it..!
Nonnet – yet another new poetic form – I was counting syllables for a reverse etheree! It fits the image so well.
A visual and poetic masterpiece.
thank u Jabblog 🙂 etheree? is that another form? 🙂 i'll check it out & try too.. glad u liked it! 🙂
thanks very much Jennifer! 🙂
Completely in love with this da Vinu… 🙂 I mean… I gotta learn this soon and try this! Awesome! 😀 😀
u first come back to dopping haikus 🙂 will teach u the form afterward da 😀 fine?
🙂