I seek the light, which gives me some life.
Life without love is like a tree without fruit.
My life seeks the love which it was given once, but denied now.
Iām nearing my last breath, yet it means a lot. One last time, show me love.
Iām just waiting, waiting for the final fall.
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
I can actually relate the tree to human life.Beneath the kindly sun, every tree (human being) should bear fruits and the flowers should blossom. Though wind may drop the leaves and rain may bring about gloom (hardships); the tree in the garden of one's heart should be nourished with love and care in order to grow well. Though nothing is permanent, I say, life should go on the same way until the final call comes.Not just a great post, but Awesome one too!! Loved the picture which goes very well. š
"Coming generations will learn equality from poverty, and love from woes" – Kahlil Gibran love is either overrated or underrated- by the time we learn to value it, its often gone…IF its a plea from your heart, hope love brightens your life again, Vinay :)wishes, devika
Woww!!!! Fabulous Fantastic Leo š š
@Creativity,thank u.
@Devika,its a plea from the dying oak actually. guess the image didnt load…
@Rumz,thanks very much da.
oh! thought you were talkin using the metaphor of the tree! :)anyway, nature has its way of taking care :)wishes, devika
@Devika,no no š the image was the twist in the 55 fiction actually! :Dglad u liked it. yes nature has its ways for sure!
@Princess,thank u
awwww its really beautiful ^_^
@Chocolover,thanks! š
Really lovely to read Leo.Yvonne.
Wonderfully expressed Vinay!
Oh I love that poem. thanks for posting Leo.
What beautiful verses you've written here. Thanks for your visit. I'll have to check out your meme sometime.
@Yvonne,thank u very much! š
@Swapna,thanks! glad u liked Swapnechy!
@Tab,thank u too.. it isn't a poem though, its a 55 fiction! š
@TWG,thank u. glad u liked the post! :)thanks for the visit? š® i've visited u many times b4 na.. why so formal suddenly? :)check out anytime.. welcome always!
it was indeed a beautiful poem..loved it.and you did all the justice with the verses and picture thereuopn…
Wow what a wonderful use of words.. Great Leo..Yours Frendly,Saravana Kumar M
Loved this."One last time, show me love."
@Nikita,thank u.. glad u liked it. it wasn't a poem, but a 55 fiction š
@Saravana,thank u. glad u liked it so much.. š
@Aayushi,thanks a lot!
What's the use of being loved if it will be on your final fall???But at least, you were loved even it was in your last moments…:P
@Amity,the love was there b4 š but not continued.. as good as no love. the oak wants to go back to those few days when he felt the love.
life without love is like a tree without fruit…it is profound. nice verse…
@Brian,thank u š glad u liked it. its more of a 55 fiction than a verse! š
Brilliant!full of emotions…Nice take on the theme
@Gabriela,thank u. glad u liked it š
Your poem do hurt. Fantastic…
@SWPUTH,thank u.. but its not a poem š just a 55 fiction š
This is just perfect, I'm so glad you left the right link over at COT!
@Keith,my pleasure! š