Moments start to lapse
Another sunrise beckons
Night cascades to day

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Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
Those moments we love to usher in…beautiful thoughts from a beautiful mind…
Beautiful and Ethereal!! :)Using the word 'cascade' intelligently, one can feel the night slip away and the day creeping in to take over.PS: I see an Acrostic too!! 😉
@Amity,thank u very much! yes, do like to usher a sunrise 😀
@Rumz,night creeping out, and the day slipping in sounds better to me 😉 🙂 glad u liked it! :Dps: the M-A-N starting letters to each line doesn't make it an acrostic. for that to happen, the haiku needs to be about MAN, not a sunrise.
An everday affair written beautifully, Leo :)wishes, devika
@Devika,thanks very much! 🙂 glad u liked it.
beautifully said within three lines ! loved it ….
A different perspective of Amity's "Moments".Wonderful.Yvonne.
beautiful :))
@Princess,thank you very much.glad u loved it. 🙂
@Yvonne,yes. i know.moments is the topic for HH.she n i have written for it :)glad u liked it! thank u.
@Chocolover,thanks v.much dear! 🙂
Nice lines 🙂
beautiful moment..sunrise always brings something special… 🙂 🙂
@Sunakshi,thank u
@Tweety,yes.. really it does! 🙂
Well expressed… I admire you a lot..Yours Frendly,Saravana Kumar M
@Saravana,thannks dude!