I loved him very much. I trusted him. He used that as bait.
I went to where he told me to come. The place was deserted. He jumped me from behind.
He outraged my modesty that day. I was an innocent victim.
He killed me. I became the judge. I sentenced my father to death.
There is a story for Thursday Tales before this post. Please do read that too.
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
Very profound Leo.Yvonne,
Our minds traveled in the same direction. Probably everybody's will!
Twist at the end!!I,too,participated in 3www for the first time-it's fun.
crushing emotions in this.
Woah! This is intense!
Intense and profound.like an automata
@Yvonne,thank u v.much!
@Rinkly,maybe so. coz the word victim is profound in this area i guess.. glad u liked mine…!
@Jaspreet,thank u. yes, 3ww is fun, and challenging at the same time! 🙂
@Thom,yes.. for the girl who falls victim too..
@Linda,thanks!
@Gautami,thank u so much!
Powerful and profound.
That's how you always express.. few intense words..piercing the hearts..
@Anthony,thank u very much.
@Ramesh,yes sir.. i like mine short n intense indeed. of course, packing the intensity to 55 words isn't easy. glad u felt i did it fine.
Rose didnt get this:(
he killed the innocence in her..sigh..every victim has a sad story behind them 🙁
Too short a post but with an astounding message!!!Can't think now how I am gonna render this prompt. You left me in awe!
Wow. I was not expecting that last line. It jumped me! well done.
Leo, a very powerful story. As I say always you inspire me in all you pen down…Yours Frendly,Saravana Kumar M
@Rosie,thats ok sweetie.. good u didnt get it 🙂
@Tweety,yes indeed. a victim does have a sad story behind..
@Amity,much thanks.. u'll render it good too i think..!
@Nara,thank u. wanted that itself..
@Saravana,thank u dude. m honored for that!
Compact and comprehensive.I like the spacing – it allows us to read between the lines…
@Stan,thank u. glad u liked the post n the presentation as well! 🙂
So sad and powerful, and all the more so for its sparseness.
@Lyn,thank u very much..!
Powerful!
I dint understand Leo 🙁
3WW in 55 words …Thats wonderful ! very profound ..the last line left me wordless !
wow – very powerful emotions here Leo.
Leo, you have a talent in saying so much, painting an entire story, with so few words. Four lines were all you needed and the whole scene conjured in my head with ease. Great work once again here!And thank you also for your comments on my site as well!
Heart rendering..no other word for it!:)
The best .. I love these twisted tales. Very profound Great job
Amazing. Whoa.
@Eva,thank u very much! 🙂
@Ava,sent u the meaning! 😉
@Arti,thank u dear… glad u liked it so much..!
@Dee,many thanks. yes, the emotions are indeed powerful.
@Jay,thank u so much.. sometimes, quantity is not needed to express the feelings. few can be a lot.glad u liked it!
@Mithe,thanks & welcome back to my blog! long time..!
@Tikki,the tale isn't as twisted as the person who abuses his own daughter..!
@Sandy,thank u very much.
m left speechles..sigh…innocent victim…
too amazing to be commented upon by meager meNo More A Victim
@Nikita,thank u.. yes, she was indeed innocent.
@Desi,don't do that. i want ur comment. glad u liked it and said it was amazing 🙂
Hmm…I liked the part where she becomes the judge and passes the death sentence.He deserved it.Packed a nice powerful punch there.
@Rumz,he certainly did deserve it.
masterful 55.
loved reading it!
🙂
thanks Ji 🙂