White beauty
Life within
White beauty
Naked still
In wind, flies
White beauty
Quickly dies
Yet wind tries
Gives it life
Phoenix like
Now reborn
Another
White beauty
Submitted on 8th September 2010 to Thursday Poets Rally Week 28 π

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Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
Just wonderfully beautifulYvonne.
Very beautiful!
@Yvonne,thank u v.much! π
@Evalinn,thanks very much! π
great one…..keep writingKind RegardsNeer
Loved the phoenix reference.. such a beautiful simple verse and a breathtaking pic Vinay π There is so much beneath the surface … loved it
@Neer,thanks dude. glad u liked it! π
@Tikkoo,yeah.. loads beneath the surface π glad u liked it! π
Very Cute, "Phoenix like Now Reborn Another White Beauty"Nice way of expressing cute thoughts,Yours Frendly,Saravana Kumar M
It's so pure and so true..inspires us to become like phoenix!!
simple yet so beautiful π
I love the purity of your poem…white beauty…:-)And the rebirth, likened to a phoenix…I admire such….I love white beauty in all its simplicity, the pic I mean…:-)
Beautiful! Beautiful! Beautiful!
Simple and succinct.Kudos Vi.
beautifullll π
@Saravana,no dude. not cute as such.. its the life of a flower na.. :)glad u liked it though..!
@Jaspreet,yes.. a flower is really pure! π glad u liked it!
@Tweety,thanks dear! π
@Amity,yes.. even i liked that picture.. suited my thoughts quite well! π glad u liked it..!
@Pooja,thanks! thanks! thanks once again! π glad u liked it! π
@Cindy,thanks! π glad u liked!
@Rajlakshmi,thank u! π
I see white beauty in your eyes…
super stunning image and poem!
thanks a lot, Ji π glad u accepted a bit old poems π is it ok to link poems I’d written in ’09 to future rallies? I never wrote for Memes those days π
yes…
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awesome π i’ve a good post to share next time already then. thanks Ji..!
Thanks for joining in..
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Have fun!
I’ve joined na, now fun will definitely come dear Ji π thank u!
Beautiful transition of Life..
Phoenix like
Now reborn
Another
White beauty
Life itself being a white beauty.. absolutely beautiful
Olivia
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thanks a lot, Olivia π glad u liked it.. thanks for stopping by mine..!
white signifies life and beauty, just wonderful to read, I love that new life becomes the Phoenix, written by a treasured soul!
thanks very much, Amanda π yeah.. white does signify that for sure π
Very beautiful and lovely:) Thank for sharing your wonderful talent and words, Leo
It always been a pleasure reading and coming by^^~
Happy Rally:D
thanks for reading my words, Riika π glad u found it lovely.. happy rally to u too π
Short but brilliant!
thanks Dennis π
wwooww… brilliant..
awesomefreakinglicious one Leo π
and obv brings in the rhythm cos of the repetition π
keep writin π
thanks very much, Megz.. glad u liked both poem pic and rhythm π oh wait, can’t be “both” then..
the words so beautifully compliment the picture π
beautifuuulllll π
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thanks, Rajlakshmi π glad u liked the image and the verse π
beautiful poem, it is soft and delicate, just like the beautiful flower you used!
thanks very much, Lynn π glad u liked the image and the verse π
Anything associated with white – Peace, purity, love – Everything rises back up like phoenix even after a fall.. Very well put, thanks for visiting, good luck with the Rally!!
Rachana.
thanks Rachana π glad u liked it.. yeah.. white is a loving color for sure.. thanks for returning the visit & commenting too!
As always leo, wonderfully written, the words were smooth from my mouth Kx
as always, Katherine, glad u liked the post and the thanks for the lovely comment π
its amazing comparison of life….but it ended kinda abrupt…. may be just kinda life.
cheers!!!
thanks, Wiser Skydiver π glad u liked it.. it is sort of life.. maybe that of a flower.. the wind takes the flower’s life and spreads it to the world π
There’s nothing quite so beautiful as a flower, and you have shown it to us.
so true, Vivienne π yes indeed, nothing quite as beautiful π
nice π
thanks, AS π glad u liked..!
Beautiful, wonderful, you truly moved me! Great job!
thanks a lot, Thoughts Not Lost π glad u liked it..
your use of repetition really drives home the point without becoming overbearing, nice poem =]
thanks a lot, Luisy π glad u liked the use of repetition in this poem. cheers!
Beautiful words and image.
When I was younger I named my future partner my White Flower.
The name symbolised her purity, honesty, peace, love and beauty.
Your poem reminds me of that.
I have found my White Flower since.
Thanks for sharing,
Peace,
ah, a white flower truly does symbolize all that, Jeffery.. glad u found your White Flower π
I very much liked it…short but profound.
thanks very much, Raven π glad u liked it..
Beautiful imagery in this poem, Leo. The short lines add to the fragility. π
thanks Christine, glad u liked the imagery in all its fragility π
How beautiful! The words and the picture are as one.
thanks, Fray Edges π glad u liked the matching image to my words as well π
Beautifully natural imagery. I’ll make sure to look out for you at the next rally!
thanks Josiah π sure.. please feel free to drop in anytime to read π
Wonderful image…both photgraphically and in words. I love the comparison to the Phoenix.
thanks Liv2Write2Day π glad u liked photo & words both.. n the comparsion as well π
A lovely picture, with beautiful words to compliment it.
thanks very much, Chris G π glad u liked it π
such beautiful words.
thank Ewan π
Happy Thursday,
Thanks for the contribution!
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happy thursday for sure Ji π m glad for sharing this..
I like the part about a phoenix reborn….good imagery!
thanks Wondrin Soul π glad u liked the imagery of the phoenix π
Brilliant, honey. Lyrical.
thanks very much, Madison π glad u liked it!
your words are light as feathers… a beautiful image…
thanks a lot, Siubhan π glad u liked it..!
So poignant and lovely.
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thank u very much, Angela π
Beautifully written… why do pretty things have to decay some day? Well, everything does eventually.. (sigh)..so that was a rhetoric..
I really like the forms you use in your poems.. the variations.. it always make reading exciting!!!
A lovely contribution to the Rally, Leo!
thanks, glad u liked my variations in the rally and in my poems in general π yeah, m loving the rally, Kavita π
Loved your poem for its pure innocence — raw natural beauty —
Joanny
thanks a lot, Joanny π glad u liked it!
I have to say I enjoyed the alternating lines with white beauty. It sticks in my head in a good way.
thanks October, glad u liked the white beauty.. many thanks for dropping by.. and that it stuck in your head..! π
Very poignant and fragile- like a flower– nicely done!
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thanks, Mairmusic π glad u liked it π
well written… it reminds me of some poem I read long ago, I don’t remember the title or poet bt it was also abt how flowers bloom for a day n spread happiness n beauty all around…
u have painted the image beautifully…
its all abt quality… abt quantity.
thanks Ankita π yeah, it is all about quality in quantity too π
Definitely a fan of picturesque brevity…enjoyed reading this piece. π
thanks a lot, Dasuntoucha π
the poem is very powerful in its simplicity. great work! really like it. and your site too. will take some time to browse more of your works. thanks!
take your own time, 700Miles π glad u liked both simplicity of the poem and also my site π welcome!
Nice flowing image of something transcendent and good. – bill
thank you Bill π glad u liked it..!
A fantastic read, it sneaks up on you
and thank you too, A.B. Thomas π
loved the flow. it felt like infinity. white seem to mean so many things at once.
thank u very much, D π
Beautiful words, beautiful flower….thanks for beautifully sharing. heartspell
thanks a lot, Heartspell, glad u liked the beauty π
Beautiful wordings. I like the feel behind it. As pure as white.
thanks a lit, Willie π
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