White Beauty

112 thoughts on “White Beauty”

1. Just wonderfully beautifulYvonne.

2. Very beautiful!

3. @Yvonne,thank u v.much! 🙂

4. @Evalinn,thanks very much! 🙂

5. great one…..keep writingKind RegardsNeer

6. Loved the phoenix reference.. such a beautiful simple verse and a breathtaking pic Vinay 🙂 There is so much beneath the surface … loved it

7. @Neer,thanks dude. glad u liked it! 🙂

8. @Tikkoo,yeah.. loads beneath the surface 😀 glad u liked it! 🙂

9. Very Cute, "Phoenix like Now Reborn Another White Beauty"Nice way of expressing cute thoughts,Yours Frendly,Saravana Kumar M

10. It's so pure and so true..inspires us to become like phoenix!!

11. simple yet so beautiful 🙂

12. I love the purity of your poem…white beauty…:-)And the rebirth, likened to a phoenix…I admire such….I love white beauty in all its simplicity, the pic I mean…:-)

13. Beautiful! Beautiful! Beautiful!

14. Simple and succinct.Kudos Vi.

15. beautifullll 🙂

16. @Saravana,no dude. not cute as such.. its the life of a flower na.. :)glad u liked it though..!

17. @Jaspreet,yes.. a flower is really pure! 🙂 glad u liked it!

18. @Tweety,thanks dear! 🙂

19. @Amity,yes.. even i liked that picture.. suited my thoughts quite well! 😀 glad u liked it..!

20. @Pooja,thanks! thanks! thanks once again! 😀 glad u liked it! 🙂

21. @Cindy,thanks! 🙂 glad u liked!

22. @Rajlakshmi,thank u! 🙂

23. I see white beauty in your eyes…

    super stunning image and poem!

    • thanks a lot, Ji 🙂 glad u accepted a bit old poems 😀 is it ok to link poems I’d written in ’09 to future rallies? I never wrote for Memes those days 😀

    • yes…

      😉

      • awesome 😀 i’ve a good post to share next time already then. thanks Ji..!

24. Thanks for joining in..
    😉
    Have fun!

    • I’ve joined na, now fun will definitely come dear Ji 🙂 thank u!

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27. Beautiful transition of Life..
    Phoenix like
    Now reborn
    Another
    White beauty
    Life itself being a white beauty.. absolutely beautiful

    Olivia
    http://oliviasmindlymatters.wordpress.com/2010/08/29/divine-desires/

    • thanks a lot, Olivia 🙂 glad u liked it.. thanks for stopping by mine..!

28. white signifies life and beauty, just wonderful to read, I love that new life becomes the Phoenix, written by a treasured soul!

    • thanks very much, Amanda 🙂 yeah.. white does signify that for sure 😀

29. Very beautiful and lovely:) Thank for sharing your wonderful talent and words, Leo

    It always been a pleasure reading and coming by^^~

    Happy Rally:D

    • thanks for reading my words, Riika 😀 glad u found it lovely.. happy rally to u too 😉

30. Short but brilliant!

    • thanks Dennis 🙂

31. wwooww… brilliant..
    awesomefreakinglicious one Leo 😀
    and obv brings in the rhythm cos of the repetition 😀
    keep writin 😀

    • thanks very much, Megz.. glad u liked both poem pic and rhythm 😉 oh wait, can’t be “both” then..

32. the words so beautifully compliment the picture 🙂
    beautifuuulllll 🙂

    http://thepoetrywagon.blogspot.com/2010/09/thursday-poets-rally-beautiful-morn.html

    • thanks, Rajlakshmi 😀 glad u liked the image and the verse 😀

33. beautiful poem, it is soft and delicate, just like the beautiful flower you used!

    • thanks very much, Lynn 🙂 glad u liked the image and the verse 😀

34. Anything associated with white – Peace, purity, love – Everything rises back up like phoenix even after a fall.. Very well put, thanks for visiting, good luck with the Rally!!
    Rachana.

    • thanks Rachana 😀 glad u liked it.. yeah.. white is a loving color for sure.. thanks for returning the visit & commenting too!

35. As always leo, wonderfully written, the words were smooth from my mouth Kx

    • as always, Katherine, glad u liked the post and the thanks for the lovely comment 😀

36. its amazing comparison of life….but it ended kinda abrupt…. may be just kinda life.

    cheers!!!

    • thanks, Wiser Skydiver 😀 glad u liked it.. it is sort of life.. maybe that of a flower.. the wind takes the flower’s life and spreads it to the world 🙂

37. There’s nothing quite so beautiful as a flower, and you have shown it to us.

    • so true, Vivienne 🙂 yes indeed, nothing quite as beautiful 😀

38. nice 🙂

    • thanks, AS 🙂 glad u liked..!

39. Beautiful, wonderful, you truly moved me! Great job!

    • thanks a lot, Thoughts Not Lost 🙂 glad u liked it..

40. your use of repetition really drives home the point without becoming overbearing, nice poem =]

    • thanks a lot, Luisy 🙂 glad u liked the use of repetition in this poem. cheers!

41. Beautiful words and image.
    When I was younger I named my future partner my White Flower.
    The name symbolised her purity, honesty, peace, love and beauty.
    Your poem reminds me of that.

    I have found my White Flower since.
    Thanks for sharing,
    Peace,

    • ah, a white flower truly does symbolize all that, Jeffery.. glad u found your White Flower 😀

42. I very much liked it…short but profound.

    • thanks very much, Raven 🙂 glad u liked it..

43. Beautiful imagery in this poem, Leo. The short lines add to the fragility. 🙂

    • thanks Christine, glad u liked the imagery in all its fragility 🙂

44. How beautiful! The words and the picture are as one.

    • thanks, Fray Edges 🙂 glad u liked the matching image to my words as well 😀

45. Beautifully natural imagery. I’ll make sure to look out for you at the next rally!

    • thanks Josiah 😀 sure.. please feel free to drop in anytime to read 🙂

46. Wonderful image…both photgraphically and in words. I love the comparison to the Phoenix.

    • thanks Liv2Write2Day 🙂 glad u liked photo & words both.. n the comparsion as well 😀

47. A lovely picture, with beautiful words to compliment it.

    • thanks very much, Chris G 🙂 glad u liked it 😀

48. such beautiful words.

    • thank Ewan 🙂

49. Happy Thursday,
    Thanks for the contribution!

    😉

    🙂

    • happy thursday for sure Ji 😀 m glad for sharing this..

50. I like the part about a phoenix reborn….good imagery!

    • thanks Wondrin Soul 🙂 glad u liked the imagery of the phoenix 😀

51. Brilliant, honey. Lyrical.

    • thanks very much, Madison 😀 glad u liked it!

52. your words are light as feathers… a beautiful image…

    • thanks a lot, Siubhan 🙂 glad u liked it..!

53. So poignant and lovely.

    http://angelacohan321.wordpress.com

    • thank u very much, Angela 🙂

54. Beautifully written… why do pretty things have to decay some day? Well, everything does eventually.. (sigh)..so that was a rhetoric..
    I really like the forms you use in your poems.. the variations.. it always make reading exciting!!!
    A lovely contribution to the Rally, Leo!

    • thanks, glad u liked my variations in the rally and in my poems in general 😀 yeah, m loving the rally, Kavita 🙂

55. Loved your poem for its pure innocence — raw natural beauty —

    Joanny

    • thanks a lot, Joanny 🙂 glad u liked it!

56. I have to say I enjoyed the alternating lines with white beauty. It sticks in my head in a good way.

    • thanks October, glad u liked the white beauty.. many thanks for dropping by.. and that it stuck in your head..! 🙂

57. Very poignant and fragile- like a flower– nicely done!
    http://mairmusic.wordpress.com/

    • thanks, Mairmusic 🙂 glad u liked it 🙂

58. well written… it reminds me of some poem I read long ago, I don’t remember the title or poet bt it was also abt how flowers bloom for a day n spread happiness n beauty all around…

    u have painted the image beautifully…

    its all abt quality… abt quantity.

    • thanks Ankita 🙂 yeah, it is all about quality in quantity too 😉

59. Definitely a fan of picturesque brevity…enjoyed reading this piece. 🙂

    • thanks a lot, Dasuntoucha 🙂

60. the poem is very powerful in its simplicity. great work! really like it. and your site too. will take some time to browse more of your works. thanks!

    • take your own time, 700Miles 🙂 glad u liked both simplicity of the poem and also my site 🙂 welcome!

61. Nice flowing image of something transcendent and good. – bill

    • thank you Bill 🙂 glad u liked it..!

62. A fantastic read, it sneaks up on you

    • and thank you too, A.B. Thomas 🙂

63. loved the flow. it felt like infinity. white seem to mean so many things at once.

    • thank u very much, D 🙂

64. Beautiful words, beautiful flower….thanks for beautifully sharing. heartspell

    • thanks a lot, Heartspell, glad u liked the beauty 🙂

65. Beautiful wordings. I like the feel behind it. As pure as white.

    • thanks a lit, Willie 🙂

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