Deep in my eyes
Resided a dream
It made me whole
It seemed close
Yet much distant
Etched in my soul
Yearned it a lot
Wished to be true
Waited for the day
Obstacles jumped
I reached so near
But it slipped away
A moment stuck
That pain in heart
That despair within
Lost in this world
Felt hopelessness
Like drowned in sin
Dark night trapped
Thoughts of gloom
Wind relieved fear
As I walked alone
My burden lesser
Escaped a lone tear
The horizon bright
Revealed a smile
After night of pains
Burning once more
In my eyes the fire
Dream dawned again
Vinay Leo R.
Poetry & writing to me are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.
The melancholy, sadness, thoughts and words in this poem are very touching. Transgression from despair to hope is beautifully described in five verses. I like poems that end bringing a new dawn after all the unhappiness!! π
Inspiring:)
Beautiful Inspirational Write Up π π Excellent Leo.
Wonderful inspiring poetry Leo, Loved it.Yvonne.
wow..i completely identify with it…you are great poet Leo!
Hi Leo;Mownin…:-)You remained melancholic for the past few days, your posts cannot hide it…and this one again…???C'mon, cheer up, look forward to a bright new dawn…:-) That's life, full of ups and downs, of highs and lows, of hits and runs…okay? But after the dark night sky, a new beautiful dawn will be ushered in…:)Have a great Sunday….:-)
Even though the poem seems to be treading water in an oceanic abyss of melancholy, the final glint of a dream dawning suggests hope that a new shoreline is nearby!
your poem and dream are wonderful, so glad it came again. Thank you for this weeks prompt.
A new dawn often brings new hope.
totally an inspiring one ^^
This was so poignant.
wonderfully written dear..perfect write up..!!Leo hats off..!!
i can correlate myself………..
Lovely
hoe else do i comment on perfect?
To dream again is everything. Thanks for this prompt, Leo.
Dear Vinu, Good Morning!Let the pains and ill feelings,Take the back seat at the break of the new dawn!Let the spring be in your feet1And new dreams and hopes,Make us work in high spirits!Wishing a bright and beautiful dawn, Sasneham, Anu
You hit at a lot of emotion here; I loved it~
@Rumya,even I like the thought that a new dawn brings hope and happiness! :)glad you liked it! π
@Aayushi,thanks very much! π
@Creativity,thank you. glad you liked it! π
@Yvonne,thank you! π glad u liked it! π
@Shraddha,thank you! π glad you liked it!
@Amity,no. not melancholic at all. just busy. this poem isn't about me, its just about a random person! π have a great Monday.
@Greyscale Territory,yes, a new shoreline is nearby! π glad you liked it!
@Tammie Lee,so glad it came again too! π
@Rinkly,yes indeed! π
@Ayu,thanks v.much π
@Anthony,thanks a lot! π
@Yamini,thank you ! π
@Jeeves,thanks! π
@Desi,thanks! π π
@Sandy,thank you for having it! π
@Anu,yes.. let the spring come back! π thank you very much!
@Paramveer,thanks friend! π
@Ellie,thanks very much! π
love the hope of a new horizon … beautiful dawning!xx,JP/deb
Touched.
Very nice, and the photo is great.
Here's to the dawn of all your dreams.
Touched my heart…so beautiful. Thanks for sharing:)
Beautiful! Thanks for the poem and for the prompt!
@JP/Deb,thank you! π even i find it a beautiful dawn! π
@Harshad,thanks! π
@Sandy,thank you very much! π
@Carina,cheers! π thanks!
@Buttercup,thanks u! glad you liked it n stopped by! π
@Tumblewords,welcome for both & thank you for stopping by! π
awesome dude……i do needed thisanyways howdy do eh…
@Mia,howdy Princess, hwz u? glad u liked it.. π
The horizon brightRevealed a smileHow beautiful, Leo! Very well written..
@Ramesh,thanks sir! :)i'll get to urs soon.. stuck with work a bit! π
Beautiful lines Leo. Nice read.
@Gyan,thanks dude! π