Trapped in a moment
Images swim in our eyes
Years seem just seconds
Reflections never seem same
Heart whispers her name
Every beat, travels fast
Her heart to mine — love

For OSI with image by prettyfreaky-jeannie

Poetry & writing are to me, a breath of fresh air in a life that is sometimes covered by the smoke of sorrow or self doubt. They also become the sweets I share to celebrate when life offers me a reason to. But most of all, they are to me, my life. For each word I write is a piece of my heart, a thought that just had to find its way into the world.

40 thoughts on “..Love..”

  1. I heard THE SIMPLER THE BETTER.. and reading you is much more then this.. πŸ™‚ love you then I love this.. bcoz it is bcoz f u…

  2. Even just for a moment…while the world seems to spin aroundThat look in one's eyes…That fast uncontrolled heartbeatThat soft whispers in one's ear…it's LOVE!nice thoughts to come up with the prompt leo….

  3. Definitely "trapped in a moment" Leo. Your poem describes the feeling very well. Nothing like that special person to invoke emotion. I appreciate your comments on my blog. I am not aware my poem is from any particular writing style. I was traveling all week and feel like I just threw the poem together with the pictures. Normally, I try to take more time on the linguistics. πŸ™‚ My best, Rob.

  4. thanks to: loch rob.yes.. nothing like that special person! :)and ok, thanks for the clarification regards the form πŸ™‚

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